Love draws themes.
Some opposites don't attract.83 total reviews
Comment from Healing
Smack on with the contest rules.
And a really great little piece of writing as well.
To the point and succinct.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Smack on with the contest rules.
And a really great little piece of writing as well.
To the point and succinct.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thanks, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
Comment from abbasjoy
Great poem, and the picture is a perfect example to go along with the antonym.
Yes indeed, hate does' lurk in destruction's schemes.'
The best way to overcome hate is to forgive, and bless the person to whom you are feeling this emotion. It simply must turn things around when you come in the opposite spirit.
Well done, and all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Great poem, and the picture is a perfect example to go along with the antonym.
Yes indeed, hate does' lurk in destruction's schemes.'
The best way to overcome hate is to forgive, and bless the person to whom you are feeling this emotion. It simply must turn things around when you come in the opposite spirit.
Well done, and all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thanks for your support and great review.
Comment from Glasstruth
Love how you've connected two opposite emotions, and how the first word is love and the last is hate. Both are equally as strong. Nice enjambment throughout. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Love how you've connected two opposite emotions, and how the first word is love and the last is hate. Both are equally as strong. Nice enjambment throughout. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks Les, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Oh this is an excellent piece of writing. I wondered how this contest worked and you have given such a great example. I love how the second line smacks the reader into what is about to happen in the third line. Loved it. Good luck! xoxo Kiwi
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Oh this is an excellent piece of writing. I wondered how this contest worked and you have given such a great example. I love how the second line smacks the reader into what is about to happen in the third line. Loved it. Good luck! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks Kiwi for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
Comment from tfawcus
A worthy entry to this amusing contest. Love and hate so closely parallel the concepts of Heaven and Hell. You have stated the case well in your poem! I rather liked the phrasing of 'lurks in destruction's schemes'.
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A worthy entry to this amusing contest. Love and hate so closely parallel the concepts of Heaven and Hell. You have stated the case well in your poem! I rather liked the phrasing of 'lurks in destruction's schemes'.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks Tony, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
Comment from jim lawler
A very nice thought and put together nicely. I like it ! You say a lot with so few words to work with and not only is it an excellent little statement, it's a true statement. I didn't see any mistakes and there is no need for revision. LOL with it! Jim
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A very nice thought and put together nicely. I like it ! You say a lot with so few words to work with and not only is it an excellent little statement, it's a true statement. I didn't see any mistakes and there is no need for revision. LOL with it! Jim
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks Jim for the wonderful review and comments.
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You're very welcome and again good luck! jim
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I like this one Short as it should be but hold a volume of emotions!! This can be a tricky format but you managed to hit it right on the head
TK
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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I like this one Short as it should be but hold a volume of emotions!! This can be a tricky format but you managed to hit it right on the head
TK
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks for the great review and comments
Comment from Gunner Lil
Outstanding and oh so true. You hit all of the prompt requirements.
An easy read with meaning. I see a number one. Good luck!
Write on.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Outstanding and oh so true. You hit all of the prompt requirements.
An easy read with meaning. I see a number one. Good luck!
Write on.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks do much for the wonderful review and comments.
Comment from GregoryCody
Ooh very interesting. You have a remarkable flow and a solid voice. Your message is very strong. What was your inspiration?
Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Ooh very interesting. You have a remarkable flow and a solid voice. Your message is very strong. What was your inspiration?
Good luck!
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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The bible Gregory! Thanks my fiend for the wonderful review,
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Oh God Bless, I love it
Comment from bizzygirl
interesting thoughts. Love/Hate heaven/schemes. Nicely written with the theme in mind. When the poem is so short It is hard to find what you like/dislike in a poem. It is only 14 words. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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interesting thoughts. Love/Hate heaven/schemes. Nicely written with the theme in mind. When the poem is so short It is hard to find what you like/dislike in a poem. It is only 14 words. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
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Believe me. I have a lot to say about everything LOL.
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Heh heh, thanks again.