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I Asked For That One

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109 total reviews 
Comment from teafor2
Excellent
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Cedar--Informative preface, personal title, expressive
picture and satirical theme complement scribe's/speaker's
succinct presentation. A universal gesture given with em-
phatic feelings. Very easy to see why this won the com-
petition. It made me hoop and holler. Congrats. teafor2

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thank you for your outstanding review, I'm so glad it made you hoop and holler. That makes it all worthwhile. Have a great day my friend. Bill
reply by teafor2 on 17-Oct-2013
    you are welcome.
Comment from marijmd
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Congrats on winning the contest. Man I feel this one - my hubby just left for 27 days - me alone with all the kids - gets home after all that and says what is for dinner. OH yeah and I work full time and he was in PARIS!
LOL

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    It really sounds like you got a raw deal with that situation. That's a long time to be by yourself, especially with kids. Men can be very insensitive at times, but we would totally be lost without you ladies. Thanks for all you gal's do. Bill
Comment from FrannyG
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Well, it certainly does all those things. A great picture to go with the only response likely from such a command. Congratulations on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

    Thanks Franny for your review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day my friend. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! This is hilarious! I see why it won the contest. Even though you selected a great picture, it pales by comparison to the mental picture you words paint. Well done indeed!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thank you my friend for your great review, I appreciate it. I'm also glad that it made you laugh, that makes it all worthwhile. Have a nice day. Bill
reply by Dawn Munro on 17-Oct-2013
    You are very welcome! :0)
Comment from Janet Foor
Exceptional
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Congratulation! I can see why your 5/7/5 poem won.

when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer

Delightful! ~~~~~~

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thank you my friend for your great review and rating, I really appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful day. Bill
Comment from justmarly
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Sounds like a man. Women are mistreated when asked for a favour after they have cleaned all day. I would put up a favorite finger as well LOL. JM Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Yep, I agree with you. This sounds just like what a man would do, sorry about that. Just remember that we all love you ladies very much and would be lost without you. Have a nice day my friend. Bill
reply by justmarly on 21-Oct-2013
    Thank you so much and a hearty welcome. JM
Comment from Maustin
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You definitely nailed it with this one. Short and right to the point... ,) I can see why you were the winner, indeed. The art work is so fitting to the theme of your work. Great piece!! Lol

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thanks my friend for your great review, I appreciate it. Have a real nice day. Bill
reply by Maustin on 21-Oct-2013
    So welcome ,)
reply by Maustin on 21-Oct-2013
    So welcome ,)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'And All I Said Was' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thank you Duchess for your great review and nice comments. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day. Bill
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-Oct-2013

    Bill, you're more than welcome.
    With my best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Cookie333
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Do I see a bird here? Pretty funny image, congrats on your win! So true, I think many have felt like using her sign language at one time or another
Thanks for a great chuckle
Karen

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thanks Karen for your nice comments, I appreciate it. I'm really glad it made you laugh. I agree with you, I would imagine that this particular sign language is used a lot, maybe just not seen all the time (ha). Take care my friend. Bill
Comment from MsPetra
Exceptional
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You nailed it. Your poem is exactly 17 syllables. I enjoyed it a great deal. It made me chuckle and smile. For the contest to be "Just for fun" your poem is spot on. Very well done. Congratulations on your win.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
    Thank you my friend for your great review and rating, I really appreciate it very much. I'm glad that it made you laugh. Have a real nice day. Bill