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~His All-He Gave~.

He died and was resurrected, for you & me...

101 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Exceptional
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During one of my Bible study sessions, a Christian doctor came gave a talk about what Jesus's body went through. Your poem brought that back to me.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thanks very much, Barbara. I had to do this one justice, I simply had to. I am happy that it brought such recollection and reflection...
Comment from cheyennewy
Exceptional
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Hi Dean,

You have written yet another superb poem and as usual your presentation is beautiful. I found the music haunting and perfect for this piece. The rhyming scheme is flawless and your well chosen words give me a perfect image of Jesus on the cross. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    What a wonderful compliment, chey. I am very grateful. Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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A vivid passionately worded truth of crucifixion of Son of God Lord Jesus Christ who took our sins and offered our righteous living a way to heaven and He gave his all dedicated to mankind, so nicely retold. 06/721

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thanks so much, Alcreator Litt Dear. I truly appreciate you reading & reviewing this one for me...
Comment from donnadiann
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The poem itself is spiritual, true, and beautiful. Good use of rhyming and alliterations.., bloodied body...battered, bleeding. Well written with emotive tone. Nice slideshow:)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thanks so much, donnadiann. I am so pleased that you thought so...
Comment from Titan Black
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You we're sure out to paint a graphic picture.
And you did just that. what I would like to know
Is how you get you poetic alliteration to flow like that?
You did your thing. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Hah, hey, your poetic alliteration ain't too bad either, my friend!
    Seriously, thanks for the wonderful comments!
Comment from GaryCecil
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Dean, you have done it again!

Another great poem from the man at hand, Dean Kuch! I think this will appeal to a ton of people, as already evident in the great reviews. Good luck in your future man, although, you don't need it. ;)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thanks so much, Gary. I appreciate that, my friend!
Comment from Cedar
Exceptional
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This certainly is an exceptional poem in every way. Just the presentation alone deserves a six. Then, add this fantastic spiritual poem and it deserves a seven, which is available, according to the number of exceptional ratings you receive. I believe there will be many, depending on the amount of promotion. You have a God given talent that should be shared with as many people as possible and not just Fanstory. I really believe that you have a great opportunity to boost your career as a writer, if you can make the right connections. In my opinion, this should win "poem of the month". Fantastic work. Bill

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    What a wonderful thing to say, Cedar, thank you. I am very happy that you liked it so much, and appreciate the outpouring of enthusiasm you show!
Comment from adewpearl
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good use of mono-rhyming in each stanza
good alliteration in phrases like driven deeply
good assonance in gentle flesh
You deliver a powerful message of faith in good poetic form
Brooke

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thank you very much, Brooke. I appreciate that...
Comment from tbacha58
Exceptional
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Oh Whoa Dean I heard about you from a very close friend, I read a lot of other poem, but this, I cant express how I felt, my heart felt like flying with the music, although so sad Jesus to be in so much pain, its amazing, is convincing, its art the way you write. Thank you so much. I am sure the priest will be proud of you. God Bless.Terry

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
    Thanks, Terry, and thank your friend for steering you my way as well! I am very glad you enjoyed it. And, hey, don't be a stranger. My portfolio is always open...
Comment from write hand blue
Exceptional
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I must give you top marks for quality.

Again you have matched the sound effects and the graphics perfectly. And created a superb story presented as a rhyming poem. You have done your friend proud... mel.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
    Thank you very much, Mel, I appreciate your kind words. I imagine that I will hear all about it from him in just a few short hours at church. I pray you are right, that man has meant a great deal to me; almost like a second father.
    Thanks so much, again...