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Happy Birthday Angel

85 total reviews 
Comment from Zue65
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Visiting Kristen's grave for 30 years is a solid proof of the family's love for their first born. This little angel of yours must really be happy in heaven with your devotion to her as you consistently shower attention to her by visiting her grave every birthday and Christmas. Such a nice and warm story, good job, an excellent write.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
    Thank you nassus so much for reading. I appreciate your time. John
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Dear John,
I have no words to express the emotions you have stirred at the reading of your touching story, of Kristen, your dear wife, and yourself. What a blessing that you now have additional children and their offspring to fill your life with joy.
Love you, Carolyn

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you Carolyn for reading and sharing my story. Our little angel has looked over us for many years and hopefully many years to come as she now has our grandchildren to watch for. Happy Holidays to you and your family. John
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I am deeply moved by your story. Yours is a deep and abiding faith, and this story is testament to how much that faith governs your lives. Blessings to you and your family. May your Christmas be filled with all the peace and joy of the season.

I do not have any sixes left this week, but this is clear and concise writing, pace perfectly and with a powerful narrative voice. Exceptional! ***************

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you for reading and sharing my story. John
reply by Dawn Munro on 27-Dec-2013
    It was my pleasure.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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My aunt lost my cousin right after Christmas and she does the same thing. I can't imagine loosing a child. Great job with this

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you for reading and sharing my story. John
Comment from Sylvia Page
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I know what it means to lose your first child, that memory stays with you always. I am very sorry for your loss and glad that you still remember to visit her grave and pay homage to her. Your article flowed very well and it was a good story to read.
Wish you a joyous and blessed Christmas,
Sylvia

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you for reading and sharing my story. John
Comment from boxergirl
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What a powerful testimony of your faith in God. It is hard to understand why things happen, and only God's Grace can help us through it. Thanks for sharing Kristin's story and May God Bless you. BG

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you BG for reading and sharing my story. Our little angel has looked over us for many years... John
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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Thanks so much for sharing this sad, yet beautiful story. I find it amazing how we can sense the presence of departed loved ones. Kristen lives on in your hearts and minds. God bless.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you for reading and sharing my story. John
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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This is very touching and superbly written, John. I'm glad you had faith to see you through what must have been an unbearable time, but perhaps that early sacrifice paid the fee for your fulfilling life and healthy family going forward. Who can say why things happen, but we prove ourselves in how we deal with adversity and what we learn from living through it. For one thing, appreciation of what we do have... and it sounds like you have a wonderful family. Wish my own kid would hurry up with the grandchildren! :)

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you Phyllis for reading and sharing my story. She has always been a part of us and will continue to be, John
Comment from joneau2
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This is an extremely emotional story, and it saddened me. A loss of a child is absolutely terrible, and , frankly, I will never understand why it happens. My wishes for a Merry Christmas go out to you and yours, and your little angel.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you for reading and sharing my story. John
Comment from kiwijenny
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I wish I had a six for this...it is simply and beautifully written. Your love shows through for your angel...for all your children and Grandchildren. We have 2 28 year olds and a 25 year old . And 2 grandchildren and I on the way. God bless you this season and always

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    I'm back from my 48 hour whirlwind trip to Florida for Christmas to see my two sons and two grandchildren. Also behind me are the 80 hour work weeks of the past six weeks. Just going to sit back and relax with my coffee and FS.

    Thank you kiwijenny for reading and sharing my story. John