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Comment from PoesyPoet
Whew, I'm glad that's over. I was hoping the cops would get to Mary Beth on time. The story did hold my interest, but I just thought it was, (and pardon me) unoriginal. It's been done...girl in bar ends up taking some stranger home and finds he's a psycho.
The writing itself was nice. Write on.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2009
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Whew, I'm glad that's over. I was hoping the cops would get to Mary Beth on time. The story did hold my interest, but I just thought it was, (and pardon me) unoriginal. It's been done...girl in bar ends up taking some stranger home and finds he's a psycho.
The writing itself was nice. Write on.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2009
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PoesyPoet Thanks for reading...Sorry it seemed old hat to you. Thanks for the review. Carol