Comment from tati

Excellent

Hi there,

The picture and the words snatched my attention right away. Wow, Thesis! Honestly, was it blue or ... Good luck in the contest. Your friend, tati (July 09, 2009)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009

LOL, thanks Tati. From what I could see, it looked blue. - Thesis

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Well, that vision of loveliness must have made your day, Thesis, huh? LOL I am a bit surprised though...you actually noticed the color of the thong?? LOL Best of luck in the contest.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009

I was in shock. Yes, in fact, it made my year. LOL Thanks for the warm comments. - Thesis

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

Yes well. The story is as old as the hills, but told with this picture sure would send a few male readers temperatures up. I wish you well in the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009

Thanks Freeflyer.

She was awesome. It got my blood boiling in a nanosecond. Then, my daughter came out of the supermarket. - Thesis

Comment from Jonez08

Excellent

Well, Thesis, leave it to you to make it hot!! lol. Great entry and very original. I'm pretty sure she welcomed the attention and certainly got it. Good luck in the contest

Cassandra

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

LOL, thanks Cassandra. She was certainly trolling. I was so weak that I took the bait. - Thanks - Thesis

Comment from Helen Tan

Excellent

Blue Thong
This is an attention grabbing title and that picture you chose...what can I say? I get your point of view!

I didn't find any SPAG or "s". Good luck in the contest.

A knowing glance from her made it more enjoyable.
I guess someone like her also enjoys the attention.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

Thanks Helen. Yes, by the look on her face, she knew exactly what she was doing. I was so weak...LOL - Thesis

Comment from MissCellanea

Excellent

At least she remembered to put ON the underwear. Never mind that it has to be pried out of the crevasse! Bravo for a great write. It isn't an easy task...not even in the review. LOL Good luck in the contest. Sue

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

Thanks Sue. Lol, it made my day. - Thesis

Comment from Rhythm2Rhyme

Excellent

Great use of the prompt! And just the right amount of provocative- it entices the reader toward you. I'd use a different picture though; I feel the one chosen takes somewhat away from the piece.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

Thanks Rhythm. It's hard to find a good photo of a blue thong. I should have had my camera that day. - Thesis

Comment from Penpal

Excellent

This certainly tells a story in very few words. Very sexy, and the knowing she knew, gives even more color. Good job, a hot write about seeing an ass without using an ess. hehehe

Pen

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

Thanks penpal. Yeah, this is a true story too, which makes it that much better. - Thesis

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Thesis...

If her hemline was that short...she knew she was giving you the show of a lifetime...You certainly must have seen more than the thong.

Congratulations...no SSSSSSSSSSSS

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

Hi Begin. Yes, she knew what she was doing. She kind of looked like Lady GaGa. She was really hot. - Thesis

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Ha-ha... I can imagine the picture. Girl shows something she is not supposed to show, and guy enjoying himself. And you ... not showing the letter S. Good work for the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2009

It took a lot not to compliment her s.. Oops, I can't use the s. - Thesis