As Sure As The Sun Rises
A tattered flag33 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
I think this is a original entry for this contest :)
I didn't pick up om any spags, and I could easily follow the conversation without any difficulty. Keeping the characters to just two is, I think, the way to approach these dialogue only contests.
Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I think this is a original entry for this contest :)
I didn't pick up om any spags, and I could easily follow the conversation without any difficulty. Keeping the characters to just two is, I think, the way to approach these dialogue only contests.
Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Alex. I am so glad you enjoyed my dialogue only contest entry. I always appreciate your good eyes.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flags have great significance in the battle and indeed in peace time and they are raised and lowered as symbols of many things in life, I enjoyed your English style write Sally, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Flags have great significance in the battle and indeed in peace time and they are raised and lowered as symbols of many things in life, I enjoyed your English style write Sally, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I?m so sorry for the long delay. I am on holiday at the shore. I am pleased you liked my dialogue only contest entry, Dolly. I appreciate the great review, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a truly excellent period piece--in plot, language, theme and all.
The dialogue is complete, needing no explanations. The unexpected
ending is very moving!
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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This is a truly excellent period piece--in plot, language, theme and all.
The dialogue is complete, needing no explanations. The unexpected
ending is very moving!
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear Janice. It is so appreciated and means so much to see your name along with your wonderful review.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo