Alphabet- Loop (A-Z)
An Unrhymed Loop Poem47 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write and this style is not easy but you have pulled it off and also had something profound to say with each line a gem, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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A clever write and this style is not easy but you have pulled it off and also had something profound to say with each line a gem, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, maybe not easy but I enjoyed the practice many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC loop poem. It seems easier than it really is. Good choice of words is the key to a perfect alphabet loop poem like this one. A very good job in my books.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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A very well-written ABC loop poem. It seems easier than it really is. Good choice of words is the key to a perfect alphabet loop poem like this one. A very good job in my books.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much and yes it is the words I need to practice****kahpot
Comment from Possummagic
I liked your "loop poetry" and it inspired me to have another try at it myself. I like the way yours flows nicely. It's not forced in any way and it follows the guidelines for " loop poetry" Good luck. PM
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I liked your "loop poetry" and it inspired me to have another try at it myself. I like the way yours flows nicely. It's not forced in any way and it follows the guidelines for " loop poetry" Good luck. PM
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you, and I think you should have a go it is very interesting****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Well this gets a six for the combination of forms, abecedarian, loop and free verse. Very well done, letters used spot on and the loop was perfect
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Well this gets a six for the combination of forms, abecedarian, loop and free verse. Very well done, letters used spot on and the loop was perfect
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Many, Many thanks for this exceptional review, on my trying to learn more about poetry and words****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very fine example of a mashup poem. I have never seen this mix of two styles before. You pull it off excellently. I didn't see any errors or omissions. Very good.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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A very fine example of a mashup poem. I have never seen this mix of two styles before. You pull it off excellently. I didn't see any errors or omissions. Very good.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, I like the word mashup as this is what it was, me just learning****kahpot
Comment from c_lucas
A true poet is one that is willing to learn. By that definition, I fall short of being a true poet. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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A true poet is one that is willing to learn. By that definition, I fall short of being a true poet. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the inspiration you have given me in your review****kahpot
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You're welcome, Kahpot. Charlie
Comment from DR DIP
I like your wonderful attempt Kahpot. Having never tried loop poetry before I appreciate the talent in doing one I like the theme that we must all work together to save the world if this planet is going to survive we all must be diligent with this cause
Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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I like your wonderful attempt Kahpot. Having never tried loop poetry before I appreciate the talent in doing one I like the theme that we must all work together to save the world if this planet is going to survive we all must be diligent with this cause
Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, you should attempt it is fun trying****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great effort hear both as an ABC poet plus a loop poem!! I like the message. Yes, with the hope and life we have in Jesus, we can pass on that hope to the next generation and work with them to preserve the beautiful creation God gave us.
Some comments:
"Become one with mother, earth needs a chance " (is it Mother Earth?
perhaps : Become one with Mother Earth who needs a chance
"Devastation unwanted on Gods given earth" (God's)
"Forsaken or lost, will lose peoples ground " (peoples')
"Ground and people who survive natures hell (nature's)
Hell can;t replace our being or importance "(can't)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Great effort hear both as an ABC poet plus a loop poem!! I like the message. Yes, with the hope and life we have in Jesus, we can pass on that hope to the next generation and work with them to preserve the beautiful creation God gave us.
Some comments:
"Become one with mother, earth needs a chance " (is it Mother Earth?
perhaps : Become one with Mother Earth who needs a chance
"Devastation unwanted on Gods given earth" (God's)
"Forsaken or lost, will lose peoples ground " (peoples')
"Ground and people who survive natures hell (nature's)
Hell can;t replace our being or importance "(can't)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for this excellent and helpful review I will put your suggestions in a.s.a.p.many thanks****kahpot
Comment from RoDanni
Very interesting style of poetry, and very well executed! It's nice to see someone just give something a shot without worrying so much whether it's just like whatever else they're good at. And yet you ended up being good at this too! Congratulations on "practising" :)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Very interesting style of poetry, and very well executed! It's nice to see someone just give something a shot without worrying so much whether it's just like whatever else they're good at. And yet you ended up being good at this too! Congratulations on "practising" :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for this excellent and encouraging review****kahpot
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you're very welcome :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and good loop poem you have penned using the alphabet. That had to take some time to do. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This is a very interesting and good loop poem you have penned using the alphabet. That had to take some time to do. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot