Wasted Time
Choose One Of The Following Titles Contest Submission57 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant entry for the "choose one of the following titles" contest! the poem flows effortlessly! procrastination is one of my favourite times, especially considering fanstory!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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this is a brilliant entry for the "choose one of the following titles" contest! the poem flows effortlessly! procrastination is one of my favourite times, especially considering fanstory!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.
Comment from Titan Black
Yes time, it always sounds familiar.
Anyway, your poetic alliteration could
use work. You have very good metaphors.
Keep writing.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Yes time, it always sounds familiar.
Anyway, your poetic alliteration could
use work. You have very good metaphors.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.
Comment from mikemagine
A sad truth here. Don't we all have a knack for wasting time? :) "Back to yesterday's regrets, Pondering the past." I can easily relate. Why do we hesitate? "That's beyond me..." That was one of my inner thoughts very often. Dreams...We need to lasso 'em...and hang on...
Mike
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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A sad truth here. Don't we all have a knack for wasting time? :) "Back to yesterday's regrets, Pondering the past." I can easily relate. Why do we hesitate? "That's beyond me..." That was one of my inner thoughts very often. Dreams...We need to lasso 'em...and hang on...
Mike
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.
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Enjoyed VERY much!!
Comment from zanya
A philosophical reflection here on TIME and what we do with it and how we can fritter it away and yet it is one of our most precious possessions
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A philosophical reflection here on TIME and what we do with it and how we can fritter it away and yet it is one of our most precious possessions
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from c_lucas
If we spent the time avoiding a task and do the task, our time would be better spent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
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If we spent the time avoiding a task and do the task, our time would be better spent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from bard owl
SOme would consider pondering something as wasted time and others would think that is what mortals need in order to feed their soul. Reflecting on the value of wasted time is something entirely different. Your poem is excellently thought-provoking. It bid me consider all the time I waste. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
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SOme would consider pondering something as wasted time and others would think that is what mortals need in order to feed their soul. Reflecting on the value of wasted time is something entirely different. Your poem is excellently thought-provoking. It bid me consider all the time I waste. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is very well written, idamarty. I can well relate to this poem in some ways. Your poem flowed nicely. And I liked how it surely will relate to others. Life is like that. The thoughts a person thinks when you sit around and think. You did a marvellous job writing this free verse.
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This is very well written, idamarty. I can well relate to this poem in some ways. Your poem flowed nicely. And I liked how it surely will relate to others. Life is like that. The thoughts a person thinks when you sit around and think. You did a marvellous job writing this free verse.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Gosh, I wish I had a 'sixer' for you. This is such an extraordinary poem and presentation, with the great artwork as well.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
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Hi,
Gosh, I wish I had a 'sixer' for you. This is such an extraordinary poem and presentation, with the great artwork as well.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
How does this not have a six-star rating? It's probably because I pay more attention to content than form with poetry.
Wow, I can relate to this so much. I'm constantly thinking about it. That's why I need to travel, go out to dinner, go for a hike to see a waterfall, play in a big poker tournament, etc. No matter what I do, I still feel like it's not enough living. You really nailed that feeling here. Well done!
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How does this not have a six-star rating? It's probably because I pay more attention to content than form with poetry.
Wow, I can relate to this so much. I'm constantly thinking about it. That's why I need to travel, go out to dinner, go for a hike to see a waterfall, play in a big poker tournament, etc. No matter what I do, I still feel like it's not enough living. You really nailed that feeling here. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
To Idamarty,
This is normal for many people and then others feel there is just not enough hours in a day.
As a free verse you kept my attention with many enjambment statements.
"procrastination" is the worst thing you can do for with it comes may regrets.
Charlene
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To Idamarty,
This is normal for many people and then others feel there is just not enough hours in a day.
As a free verse you kept my attention with many enjambment statements.
"procrastination" is the worst thing you can do for with it comes may regrets.
Charlene
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014