~His All-He Gave~.
He died and was resurrected, for you & me...101 total reviews
Comment from Sararb
Such a true account of the crucifixion of Christ. Your words describe the horror of it all. It is so sad to think of the horrors that man can do. He suffered and died on the cross so that we could have eternal life. There is no greater love than that. God Bless you for a piece that is well written. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Such a true account of the crucifixion of Christ. Your words describe the horror of it all. It is so sad to think of the horrors that man can do. He suffered and died on the cross so that we could have eternal life. There is no greater love than that. God Bless you for a piece that is well written. Sararb :)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, for the kind words and generous rating, Sararb. I I really appreciate it...
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
You excelled in the art of poetry with this piece my friend. With the sound you have put with it it just makes for so much better a read and actually allows the words to sink in. Well done and your pastor is right, spread the word.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You excelled in the art of poetry with this piece my friend. With the sound you have put with it it just makes for so much better a read and actually allows the words to sink in. Well done and your pastor is right, spread the word.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you Shalk, I appreciate the kind words...
Comment from emjaihammond
Definitely six, I don't know why this won't let me give anything higher than five, but I tried. I loved this poem. It's beautiful. It covers the day Christ died and lays it before any who would seek to know more about Him. God bless you for sharing your faith so beautifully, both in word, sight and sound.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Definitely six, I don't know why this won't let me give anything higher than five, but I tried. I loved this poem. It's beautiful. It covers the day Christ died and lays it before any who would seek to know more about Him. God bless you for sharing your faith so beautifully, both in word, sight and sound.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Ah, don't worry about it, emjaihammond, it happens to me all of the time, too! The fact that you thought that much about it and enjoyed the presentation is worth far more that any six star rating you could give me. I appreciate it!
Comment from Caressa_08
This is such a true realization of Christ's crucifixion, along with the hammering, making your poem come to life & letting the reader know the importance of what occurred, that day, & how it can change one's life, to take up our cross, even though you didn't put that phrase in your poem, & too, to follow Him...Though, done in a manner, that I have never seen before....and gave up his ghost, interesting...
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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This is such a true realization of Christ's crucifixion, along with the hammering, making your poem come to life & letting the reader know the importance of what occurred, that day, & how it can change one's life, to take up our cross, even though you didn't put that phrase in your poem, & too, to follow Him...Though, done in a manner, that I have never seen before....and gave up his ghost, interesting...
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Caressa, for that wonderful compliment and enthusiastic review!
Comment from Zue65
Yes, Dean, the Pastor is true, our duty as writers is to effect change if not to evangelize our Faith in God. I have to be honest, I am not into crimes and murders and blood, and the gory details of killing, I feel we become instruments too, of criminality because those with criminals are imaginative and also creative like the writers and sometimes our work nurture them because we constantly feed them with new ideas on how to kill their victims. I like more this piece, for it is about unflinching faith in God the Father. God bless, my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Yes, Dean, the Pastor is true, our duty as writers is to effect change if not to evangelize our Faith in God. I have to be honest, I am not into crimes and murders and blood, and the gory details of killing, I feel we become instruments too, of criminality because those with criminals are imaginative and also creative like the writers and sometimes our work nurture them because we constantly feed them with new ideas on how to kill their victims. I like more this piece, for it is about unflinching faith in God the Father. God bless, my friend.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks, nassus1957. I appreciate that, my friend...
Comment from poeticpatchwork
WOW! That is an awesome poem! The terrible picture that the words paint-
"His flesh was beaten, tattered, so torn-
Mankind's sins, into which we're all born
spat on, ridiculed, with viscious scorn-
Adorning his head-- a crown of thorns."
The sacrifice for our salvation! Priceless!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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WOW! That is an awesome poem! The terrible picture that the words paint-
"His flesh was beaten, tattered, so torn-
Mankind's sins, into which we're all born
spat on, ridiculed, with viscious scorn-
Adorning his head-- a crown of thorns."
The sacrifice for our salvation! Priceless!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Terrible is surely was, poeticpatchwork. Such a selfless sacrifice that can never be duplicated. Thanks for such a wonderful review!
Comment from MoonMuse
A beautiful job telling the story in such poetic form. The presentation is beautiful and haunting. This was truly a wonderful job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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A beautiful job telling the story in such poetic form. The presentation is beautiful and haunting. This was truly a wonderful job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Why, thanks so much, MoonMuse. It pleases me that you thought so!
Comment from Spitfire
This is an amazing piece, Dean. And great use of color to enhance the theme.
"My God, how much longer can this last?"-- This reveals the human side of Jesus.
You make it so clear the pain suffered for us. I didn't turn on the sound track. More than I could bare.
Ground split asunder, quaking the earth;
our eternal Salvation, given birth.
Genius, my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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This is an amazing piece, Dean. And great use of color to enhance the theme.
"My God, how much longer can this last?"-- This reveals the human side of Jesus.
You make it so clear the pain suffered for us. I didn't turn on the sound track. More than I could bare.
Ground split asunder, quaking the earth;
our eternal Salvation, given birth.
Genius, my friend.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Shari. It's always a pleasure to get your unique insights in relation to my work, and I do appreciate it, very much!
Comment from _maynard_
This is a very good peace of poetry I loved reading it very much it flowed very well and the poems picture was very good great picture and beam thanks
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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This is a very good peace of poetry I loved reading it very much it flowed very well and the poems picture was very good great picture and beam thanks
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Michael, for your outstanding review!
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its cool it was a nice peace too read and thank you for writing it
Comment from NicciFaye
I am GLAD that I WAS Able to give this a SIX....it deserves more..................the hammering of the nails sound effect.............the very dramatic and truthful poem.........Dean............your talents reach far beyond horror my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I am GLAD that I WAS Able to give this a SIX....it deserves more..................the hammering of the nails sound effect.............the very dramatic and truthful poem.........Dean............your talents reach far beyond horror my friend.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, Nicci. Such a wonderful thing to say, and I am most grateful...