A Life Disrupted
The tragedy of Alzheimers62 total reviews
Comment from Permelia
This poem broke my heart- it described so well my mother-in-law. , "Why do you call me Grandma?" She thought she was young- her last coherent sentence before never speaking again, and lying in the fetal position was she looked up at my youngest child and said, "Oh, I know who you are- your my beloved grandson!" with the sweetest smile - then her mind went blank. Alzheimer is a dreadful illness. My mother-in-law was a brilliant woman - a school teacher..
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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This poem broke my heart- it described so well my mother-in-law. , "Why do you call me Grandma?" She thought she was young- her last coherent sentence before never speaking again, and lying in the fetal position was she looked up at my youngest child and said, "Oh, I know who you are- your my beloved grandson!" with the sweetest smile - then her mind went blank. Alzheimer is a dreadful illness. My mother-in-law was a brilliant woman - a school teacher..
Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Permelia, thank youn ever so much for stopping by to read and review this work. Thank you for telling me of your experience. It is heartwrenching.. jls
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Such beautifully written poem about a horrible roblem. I worked as a hair stylist in a nursing home a.couple years ago and it seemed about 90% of the rsidents had alzheimers.
So sad. I'm sorry you had to experience it that way.
Your poetry is a great contender!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Such beautifully written poem about a horrible roblem. I worked as a hair stylist in a nursing home a.couple years ago and it seemed about 90% of the rsidents had alzheimers.
So sad. I'm sorry you had to experience it that way.
Your poetry is a great contender!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Jewel, thank you ever so much wonderful friend. I apologize for just getting back to you. Life is so busy.. at least for me.. and look at you a contender also.. I am going to have to give you more challenges.. again thank you.. jimi
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is very powerful writing, Jimi. You've really accentuated the twin curses of loneliness and confusion, and by doing so given insight into what must be a terrifying experience.
Mike
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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This is very powerful writing, Jimi. You've really accentuated the twin curses of loneliness and confusion, and by doing so given insight into what must be a terrifying experience.
Mike
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Mike, oh goodness, thank you ever so much. An exceptional coming from a writer of your calibre is truly humbling.. thank you once again my friend.. jimi
Comment from Hitcher
Unfortunately I know all about the darkness that is alzheimers and the knock on affects that are far reaching and very destructive, you describe the misty mind of the inflicted very well Jimi. I only hope I don't go the same way as my father, it was heart-breaking to see him lost within himself and a shadow of the man he was.
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Unfortunately I know all about the darkness that is alzheimers and the knock on affects that are far reaching and very destructive, you describe the misty mind of the inflicted very well Jimi. I only hope I don't go the same way as my father, it was heart-breaking to see him lost within himself and a shadow of the man he was.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Hitcher, one more time sir.. a big big thank you... jimi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jlsavell
Your poem about the tragedy of Alzheimers is so well written with such caring a loving emotion especially when you said--
I smile, for I know that she loves me so
But still I am puzzled, for I just don't know
why she says my guests will be here soon
and I will have lunch with them at noon
Gert
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Hello jlsavell
Your poem about the tragedy of Alzheimers is so well written with such caring a loving emotion especially when you said--
I smile, for I know that she loves me so
But still I am puzzled, for I just don't know
why she says my guests will be here soon
and I will have lunch with them at noon
Gert
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Gert, you are always so very kind and supportive of me aand my writing endeavors.. thank you once again... jimi
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Smiles and you are so welcome
Love
Gert
Comment from donaldww
A poem about the puzzling and sad world of Alzheimer's Disease, family reaching out, the confused stare...
Next, they take a chair and sit beside me
Pull out old photographs for me to see
They're all very nice with faces that smile
But they're just strangers that visit a while
--and now frustration, more confusion
--wonder where family is...
And when they leave, I begin to recall
memories of loved ones, why don't they call?
Perhaps explain to me why I'm here;
for only strangers to bring me good cheer?
An excellent poem that digs into the heart of Alzheimer's.
Cheers!
DW
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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A poem about the puzzling and sad world of Alzheimer's Disease, family reaching out, the confused stare...
Next, they take a chair and sit beside me
Pull out old photographs for me to see
They're all very nice with faces that smile
But they're just strangers that visit a while
--and now frustration, more confusion
--wonder where family is...
And when they leave, I begin to recall
memories of loved ones, why don't they call?
Perhaps explain to me why I'm here;
for only strangers to bring me good cheer?
An excellent poem that digs into the heart of Alzheimer's.
Cheers!
DW
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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donaldw, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am honored..jlsavell
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Amazing. A priceless post, an exceptional example of telling a story within a poem.
I am duly impressed with how you handled every aspect of this inspiring and tender poem.
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Amazing. A priceless post, an exceptional example of telling a story within a poem.
I am duly impressed with how you handled every aspect of this inspiring and tender poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Spiritual Echo, this is truly an honor, truly. I am humbled... jimi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I wish I had a six for this, it was a powerful work.
So much of that type of dementia is truly not understood.
What happens to a brain and the thought process causing such sudden shifts in a persons life.
You grabbed it all in this piece. Sad and painful losing a brother or anyone to such a disease.
Thank you for sharing your story.
Maureen
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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I wish I had a six for this, it was a powerful work.
So much of that type of dementia is truly not understood.
What happens to a brain and the thought process causing such sudden shifts in a persons life.
You grabbed it all in this piece. Sad and painful losing a brother or anyone to such a disease.
Thank you for sharing your story.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Maureen, thank you ever so much. I am thrilled you stopped by. Thank you thank you... jimi
Comment from Meta~Mark
wow..the old car depicts the lonliness of this poem..this disease makes for the feeling of empty and your author notes gives another spin that violence can occur
BRAVO for this original and compelling poem
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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wow..the old car depicts the lonliness of this poem..this disease makes for the feeling of empty and your author notes gives another spin that violence can occur
BRAVO for this original and compelling poem
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Metaphorical-Mark, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am humbled... jlsavell
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for having the courage to write and share this poignant poem, along with adding the tragic details in your notes. I hope the creation brought you some solace. I admired your writing the piece in rhymed couplets and quatrains. Your title established the mood and theme powerfully. Your use of the first person and focus on being "puzzled" adds excellent immediacy. -Joan
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Thank you for having the courage to write and share this poignant poem, along with adding the tragic details in your notes. I hope the creation brought you some solace. I admired your writing the piece in rhymed couplets and quatrains. Your title established the mood and theme powerfully. Your use of the first person and focus on being "puzzled" adds excellent immediacy. -Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Joan E. It is so great to hear from you again. Thank you ever ever so much.. I appreciate you very much... jimi
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I have been trying for the past four days to get back into your portfolio to see if there are more posts I haven't read, but the site will not let me in. -Joan
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that is puzzling.. I do not know why??? crazy.. maybe we should ask tom.. what does it do???
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I remeber you told me that before, but I just thought it was a minor glitch.. I have no idea..
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It seems to have gotten worse. You might ask other reviewers if they experience it on your profile and then contact Tom. Good luck- Joan
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When I click on your name, which I just did again, it goes to "remarks" and won't allow access to your portfolio at all. -J
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I will, thank you for letting me know.. it is so bizarre..