Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Chapter 12; part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from gerry26
This is a wonderful read. Interesting and at time heart stopping. Your attention to detail and the dialog is spot on.
Happy Holidays to you and yours.
gerry
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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This is a wonderful read. Interesting and at time heart stopping. Your attention to detail and the dialog is spot on.
Happy Holidays to you and yours.
gerry
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nicnac
Fabulous action chapter, Barbara. I read faster and faster... so glad Cassie is okay.
I didn't notice any bumps or spag. I can't wait to see how the story ends. I'm a little nervous about Joe returning to rescue the other girls.
I'm sorry to hear about your virus/bed rest. I know that it's difficult to stay in bed. Please know I continue to pray for you.
Big hugs - and if I don't talk to you before then -- Have a beautiful Christmas!
Nic
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Fabulous action chapter, Barbara. I read faster and faster... so glad Cassie is okay.
I didn't notice any bumps or spag. I can't wait to see how the story ends. I'm a little nervous about Joe returning to rescue the other girls.
I'm sorry to hear about your virus/bed rest. I know that it's difficult to stay in bed. Please know I continue to pray for you.
Big hugs - and if I don't talk to you before then -- Have a beautiful Christmas!
Nic
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
Comment from zoocq
Thank you for following Dr's orders! I cannot imagine how you continue to post and try to stay sane @ the same time...God Bless You and I pray for your recovery...I had to catch up on some chapters...it is wonderful!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for following Dr's orders! I cannot imagine how you continue to post and try to stay sane @ the same time...God Bless You and I pray for your recovery...I had to catch up on some chapters...it is wonderful!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your well wishes and the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barabara - another fabulous post. I suppose I assumed a happy ending, but you've just created that tension where I was never sure. I hope you do rest up some. It's not all bad to be home with family. Best wishes to you and yours. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Hi Barabara - another fabulous post. I suppose I assumed a happy ending, but you've just created that tension where I was never sure. I hope you do rest up some. It's not all bad to be home with family. Best wishes to you and yours. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Just what you don't need is a nasty virus to make you feel awful. I am glad you don't have to spend Xmas in the hospital. So stay in bed and be well. I am thrilled that Joe was able to escape with Cassie and that she wasn't harmed...well much anyway. I wish that Joe had not gone back to that danger but he feels obligated to free the other girls. Wonderful chapter, which I have come to expect from you talented pen. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Hi Barbara,
Just what you don't need is a nasty virus to make you feel awful. I am glad you don't have to spend Xmas in the hospital. So stay in bed and be well. I am thrilled that Joe was able to escape with Cassie and that she wasn't harmed...well much anyway. I wish that Joe had not gone back to that danger but he feels obligated to free the other girls. Wonderful chapter, which I have come to expect from you talented pen. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from dmjones
This is a really good fast paced chapter. With all the action that's what you want. I enjoyed reading it and now that Cassie is rescued, Sara and Joe can get back to their romance. Well done. I hope you have a great Christmas.
Donna
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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This is a really good fast paced chapter. With all the action that's what you want. I enjoyed reading it and now that Cassie is rescued, Sara and Joe can get back to their romance. Well done. I hope you have a great Christmas.
Donna
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Yes, we will soon return to the romance section of this book. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
I hope you feel better and am glad you are in your own home for the holidays. You rest all yo can. We'll muddle through and wait patiently until you are feeling up to posting. I hope you also have another story in your head to share. I love seeing your writing.
At the same moment, a bullet whizzed past him and hit (-that) (the) man.
Great job, and Happy Holidays.
Hugs book
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I hope you feel better and am glad you are in your own home for the holidays. You rest all yo can. We'll muddle through and wait patiently until you are feeling up to posting. I hope you also have another story in your head to share. I love seeing your writing.
At the same moment, a bullet whizzed past him and hit (-that) (the) man.
Great job, and Happy Holidays.
Hugs book
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your eagle eye and wonderful review. I have another novel finished. I usually only post completed novels, but I am not happy with that novel. I am writing two novels, but set them on the back burner, when cancer happened. I may ATTEMPT, to complete one of them while trying to post. I need to wait and see what happens.
Comment from RKagan
Joe is a gentleman and that is for sure. He even gave Cassie his shirt. I hope he is not going to die when he goes back to rescue the others. God Bless you, and keep you healthy...Merry Christmas my friend and Happy New Year. May this year bring you health and well being.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Joe is a gentleman and that is for sure. He even gave Cassie his shirt. I hope he is not going to die when he goes back to rescue the others. God Bless you, and keep you healthy...Merry Christmas my friend and Happy New Year. May this year bring you health and well being.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the well wishes and I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara I never grow tired of your work it never fails to impress me and is always a pleasure to read. I can find nothing to suggest for improvment, excellent job, wishing you all the best at this time of year!! :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Barbara I never grow tired of your work it never fails to impress me and is always a pleasure to read. I can find nothing to suggest for improvment, excellent job, wishing you all the best at this time of year!! :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from BPL76
Ok i found i had trouble reading the conversations
I thin if you read it out loud it would help for example
She's not hurt. She's just getting checked-out.
i thin it would sound better as
she's not hurt .she is checking out
But this is your story so i hope you keep it as is
Good read
BPL
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Ok i found i had trouble reading the conversations
I thin if you read it out loud it would help for example
She's not hurt. She's just getting checked-out.
i thin it would sound better as
she's not hurt .she is checking out
But this is your story so i hope you keep it as is
Good read
BPL
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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she is checking out; makes it sound as if she is leaving somewhere. She is being checked-out by the doctor. Thank you for your kind review.