Comment from
sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful poem about the turquoise stone. i loved reading it. it is very well written with good flow and good form, i wish you the best of luck in the contest. it is searing sun, spell check doesn't recognize seering.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2010
Oh thank you! you are so right! i will fix this too! I am really happy you liked this Miss Sweet! ") Susan
reply by sweetwoodjax on 16-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2010
") I am always glad to hear from you! And you have always been kind to me...hence, ") "Miss Sweet"! ") Susan