Days of Summer
Summer Days34 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Pam.
You have successfully set up a picture of a mild summer day. You go through to the end of the day as sunsets, and you change the narrative but then the sun rises again, and you continue the narrative in a different setting. The poem is well done. Your phrasing and rhymes are good. It is well written.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hello Pam.
You have successfully set up a picture of a mild summer day. You go through to the end of the day as sunsets, and you change the narrative but then the sun rises again, and you continue the narrative in a different setting. The poem is well done. Your phrasing and rhymes are good. It is well written.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Robert for your lovely supportive review
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You're welcome.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful celebration of nature! Your word choics are beautiful including "the glorious moon is first to arrive" and "the soft summer gown now shimmers in light." You capture tsummer and the transition into autumn so well. I can almost feel the warm breeze and hear the rustling leaves. So well done.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What a delightful celebration of nature! Your word choics are beautiful including "the glorious moon is first to arrive" and "the soft summer gown now shimmers in light." You capture tsummer and the transition into autumn so well. I can almost feel the warm breeze and hear the rustling leaves. So well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Michael for the supportive detailed review
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful poem of "Days of Summer". I loved the personification of summer, leaves, shadows, flowers, but the moon is my favorite.
I enjoyed reading your delightful piece.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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A beautiful poem of "Days of Summer". I loved the personification of summer, leaves, shadows, flowers, but the moon is my favorite.
I enjoyed reading your delightful piece.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Janet for your lovely detailed review
Comment from DonandVicki
I can tell that you have put a lot of thought, work and time into this smooth rhyming poetic tribute to Summer. I love the summer but will enjoy the coolness of fall as well.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I can tell that you have put a lot of thought, work and time into this smooth rhyming poetic tribute to Summer. I love the summer but will enjoy the coolness of fall as well.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you DonandVicki for your lovely detailed review