A Child's Kiss
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Comment from June Sargent
I f don't know who's cuter! The pooch or the girl giving a smooch. Your lighthearted poem put a smile on my face. And the artwork is precious. Made my day!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I f don't know who's cuter! The pooch or the girl giving a smooch. Your lighthearted poem put a smile on my face. And the artwork is precious. Made my day!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi June, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
It is definitely clear to see that children can bring to people, and this came across well in your piece, Debi. Children can say really funny things as well, particularly when they're not sure of the meaning of what they're saying. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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It is definitely clear to see that children can bring to people, and this came across well in your piece, Debi. Children can say really funny things as well, particularly when they're not sure of the meaning of what they're saying. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Jacob, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
Anyone who does not fall immediately in love with this delicious photo has a heart the size of an under developed pea. There may not be a child anywhere in the world who looks exactly like the one in the illustration, but there should be. I cannot imagine God not deciding to create one who looks thus.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Anyone who does not fall immediately in love with this delicious photo has a heart the size of an under developed pea. There may not be a child anywhere in the world who looks exactly like the one in the illustration, but there should be. I cannot imagine God not deciding to create one who looks thus.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Nomi, and thanks so much for the nice comments about the picture of the little girl. I appreciate you like my art choice. Love, Debi
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Love it!
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I am glad you loved the photo.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, a child's kiss does work wonders for everybody. If it doesn't, then the problem is that person not the child's kiss. LOl I also believe in the healing powers of hugs. My boys used to kiss the dog when they were little too. Heck, why not? I had fun reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Yes, a child's kiss does work wonders for everybody. If it doesn't, then the problem is that person not the child's kiss. LOl I also believe in the healing powers of hugs. My boys used to kiss the dog when they were little too. Heck, why not? I had fun reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Barb, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
This is an adorable poem. I child's kiss is magical. It really makes you feel so special. Children need to be hugged and kissed and to hear words of love from their parents. I like this picture. The child almost looks like she is trying to look like her dog and doing a pretty job of doing it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This is an adorable poem. I child's kiss is magical. It really makes you feel so special. Children need to be hugged and kissed and to hear words of love from their parents. I like this picture. The child almost looks like she is trying to look like her dog and doing a pretty job of doing it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Beth, you are so right. Everything you say too is so true of ways for children to boost health even more. Most of them just have to be in my presence and I am feeling better.
So, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
There indeed is something special about the kiss of a child and they benefits that we receive from it. I enjoyed this poem very much as ITheir indeed is something special about the kiss of a child and they benefits that we receive from it. I enjoyed this poem very much as I love children and I love to be around them. I love to talk with them as they get older. They're just wonderful.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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There indeed is something special about the kiss of a child and they benefits that we receive from it. I enjoyed this poem very much as ITheir indeed is something special about the kiss of a child and they benefits that we receive from it. I enjoyed this poem very much as I love children and I love to be around them. I love to talk with them as they get older. They're just wonderful.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Patricia, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Child's Kiss, presented with five AABB-rhymed quatrains, allows that there are many positive results from hugging and kissing children and pets.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This poem, A Child's Kiss, presented with five AABB-rhymed quatrains, allows that there are many positive results from hugging and kissing children and pets.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Bill, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a precious poem. And don't get me started on that adorable picture! I definitely believe tat there are heart benefits in a child's kiss. And dogs can lower blood pressure and stress levels within minutes of holding them. God knew what He was doing. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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What a precious poem. And don't get me started on that adorable picture! I definitely believe tat there are heart benefits in a child's kiss. And dogs can lower blood pressure and stress levels within minutes of holding them. God knew what He was doing. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hi Marilyn, your review meant a lot to me. Thank you so very much for the lovely words for my kiss poem. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I think it should be "kids' emotions" - add apostrophe "s" to show possession
Also "it's" very strong and feels so mild - the apostrophe for "it is"
I'll add that animals have been shown to do the same thing, and here you've given us a sweet picture of both child and animal!
This is so sweet and I like lines like: it('s) very strong and feels so mild - this shows us that strength doesn't necessarily mean hard.
This one really flows, Deb. I love it!
I call you "Deb" occasionally; any problem with that, as you seem like a Deb more than a Debi to me, lol!
Lots of love all around on this one.
xoxo
P
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I think it should be "kids' emotions" - add apostrophe "s" to show possession
Also "it's" very strong and feels so mild - the apostrophe for "it is"
I'll add that animals have been shown to do the same thing, and here you've given us a sweet picture of both child and animal!
This is so sweet and I like lines like: it('s) very strong and feels so mild - this shows us that strength doesn't necessarily mean hard.
This one really flows, Deb. I love it!
I call you "Deb" occasionally; any problem with that, as you seem like a Deb more than a Debi to me, lol!
Lots of love all around on this one.
xoxo
P
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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OMGosh, I cannot believe that I forgot to do the apostrophes and I do know better, but I was doing some of my editing from my floating iPad in bed and I meant to put the finishing touches when I got up and had the big one with the keyboard attached. I would rather you catch it than anyone else, so thank you so much.
And you may call me Deb any time you want. It's kinda funny that you ask that because my best friend and my husband and my siblings call me Deb and no one else. So it is only right that my other sis would too. My sisters are 7, 8 and 9 years older than me, so it feels good to have one exactly right age now. LOL.. Dang, I had to ruin it by taking about age.
Thanks for all the wonderful comments for this poem. It is doing well and I appreciate the six stars so very much. Love ya lots and thanks again, sis.
Love, Deb.
Comment from Sally Law
Ah Debi, this is precious and warm my heart. I must say a kiss really does benefit the health and is a proven medical fact. I've seen people rally from near death and hold on a while because of a kiss. Beautifully written and illustrated in rhyming verse. Sending you my best today as always and Love and Blessings across the miles.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Ah Debi, this is precious and warm my heart. I must say a kiss really does benefit the health and is a proven medical fact. I've seen people rally from near death and hold on a while because of a kiss. Beautifully written and illustrated in rhyming verse. Sending you my best today as always and Love and Blessings across the miles.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Your review meant the world to me, Sally. Thank you so very much for the lovely words and the six stars. I love kids so much that when I saw this picture I knew I had to do something with it. Thanks again, with all my heart.
Love, Debi