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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very lovely birthday poem for our dear Patricia. She has been a blessing to me for a long time on here. I pray she has an abundantly blessed birthday! Thank you for sharing dear friend! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Hi Teri, she will love reading your lovely words. I appreciate your awesome review for this birthday poem for our dear Patricia. She is such a lovely woman and she blessed me greatly just reading her story. Thanks for your kind comments my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Oh Debi, I love Patricia. She's such a lovely person, and always writes such inspiring things. What a woman to have raised those 4 children on her own. I didn't realize that about her. I'm excited to see all the accomplishments she's had. Leading ladies to the Lord, walking all those miles, losing all that weight, knitting caps, stand-up comedy!! When does she rest?
Thank you, Debi and Happy Birthday, Patricia.
Love you both,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Hi Rhonda, yes, she is a remarkable lady. And I didn't realize how much until she gave me some info about her. I don't think she had to raise the kids alone though, because she was married thirty seven years before he passed away. But I know when you hear that she has been widowed 29, that is where your thoughts go.
    Thank you so much for all of your kind comments for Patricia and her poem.
    I know she will enjoy reading all of these too. Thanks again, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
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Here you go again, writing a fantastic tribute to someone who has done so much, that I am not very familiar with . Meaning reading and reviewing their work.
I NEED TO GET OUT MORE!!!

A family line of twenty, kids, grands and great-grands... that's amazing. God bless her.

She's also done amazing things in her life, I'm on awe!

Well done, sis!

John

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    John, thanks for the honor of your six stars as it truly means a lot to me.
    You do spoil me and always have the nicest things to say. Thank you a million times, I thank you.

    Thank you so much for all of your kind comments for Patricia and her poem.
    I know she will enjoy reading all of these too. Thanks again, my little bro.
    (But not by much, LOL). Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Happy Birthday to one of the first people to welcome me to FanStory and become my follower and friend. Patricia has always treated me so kindly and has been open to reading, without judgement, my works that weren't exactly in her comfort zone. Have the best birthday ever and many, many more years of health and happiness.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Hi Marilyn, that is so cool that she was one of the first people that welcomed you here. It sounds like her.
    I appreciate your awesome review for this birthday poem for our dear Patricia. She is such a lovely woman and she blessed me greatly just reading her story. Thanks for your kind comments my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I will surely wish Patricia a Happy Birthday!! I have just recently become a fan of hers and have been blessed daily by reading her poems. God is surely working through her. We, on FanStory are blessed by your generous spirit. Thank you for doing this service for us.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Hi Barb, you always say the sweetest things and it always means so much to me. I appreciate your awesome review for this birthday poem for our dear Patricia. She is such a lovely woman and she blessed me greatly just reading her story. Thanks for your kind comments my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Boogienights
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Another great birthday poem! How do you do it? I know she'll love it, as l love mine...one l finally got to read! It's a lovely poem and you're very kind to have written it. Keep doind what you're doing.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Oh Sharon, you are so sweet, but coming from such a wonderful poet like yourself, that means a lot to me. And I am so glad that you enjoyed your poem. I did use FS to put it together, because I wanted it to look better with the art and the fonts, etc. and then I disabled it. And you are very welcome.
    I also hope that your daughter is getting the help she needs as I have been praying for her.


    I appreciate your awesome review for this birthday poem for our dear Patricia. She is such a lovely woman and she blessed me greatly just reading her story. Thanks for your kind comments my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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They acted out her book on the radio? How cool is that!

Sounds like she walked a 1,000 miles a year; wow! You go, girl! As a walker, I'm impressed.

As a knitter, I'm even more impressed with the knitting:-)

The stanza about stand-up comedy, do you mean "That had TO be an awesome scene"?

Happy birthday, Patricia!

xo to Debi and Patricia

Pam

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Dearest Pam, this is why I try to read my reviews right away, even if I cannot answer them right away. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Obviously the one time I did not reread, as I change my lines over and over until that little voice in me no longer tells me something isn't quite right. But a typo like that one is quite obvious. I wonder why no one else caught it? Well I am very glad you did. Thanks again.

    She has an amazing life and I could have gone on and on.
    Anyway, thanks sis for catching the typo and I appreciate you so much.
    Love, Debi

    I knew you were a walker, but I did not know that you also knit. I used to knit and crochet a lot, but not since I got back into writing.
reply by Pam Lonsdale on 07-Jun-2024
    I think sometimes we read what is supposed to be there instead of what is - our brains just work that way.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Speaking of brains, I think you are definitely the wise one of the two of us. Makes sense.
Comment from nomi338
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An awesome tribute to an awesome woman, written by an awesome writer. How awesome is that? you excel at writing tributes so much that it has to now be your awesome calling card. You do it so well, it for you, cannot be hard.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    And wow, I must respond right now to the most awesome reviewer with the most awesome comments and awesome six stars. Ok, so I hope you do know that I think you are pretty awesome. There has never been any secret about that. LOL.. and a review like this could get me a job writing for Hallmark.
    I used to do a birthday card on my computer, but no poetry.
    But on the back of the card I would print on each one,
    Made by Hallmarq-uette. That was my signature where everyone knew where they came from. Pretty clever, eh?? Hahaha!
    You'd think so, but not everyone got the hallmark part of it, so oh well. Many did tho.

    In answer to your question, a birthday card is never easy and the reason why is because I am not trying to please just me. So if that voice bugs me at all, I will work on a line to get it just right for an hour if I have to. Rhyme and meter isn't easy when you have crucial info to get in there. Anyway, you asked so I thought I would share that part with you. And I appreciate the chance to tell a little about them.
    As always, you know how much I appreciate you and I think you are the best reviewer ever. So guess what, check your pm messages soon.
    Dang, I just can't keep a secret tho. LOL, thanks my sweet brother for this package of the most awesome review ever. Lotsa love, Debi
reply by nomi338 on 07-Jun-2024
    The love is returned full measure. Not everyone is capable of making someone else feel especially special. You my dear, are fully able to do just that, and I love you for it.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    😘♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🥰
Comment from patcelaw
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Thank you so very much, Debi. I have listened to the whole thing. I listen to all the hymns and writing this review with tears in my eyes. Thank you so much for the lovely job that you did and wishing me a happy birthday. thank you too for the lovely YouTube renderings of the some of my favorite hymns. The surprise one that you put up for me is how great thou are. That was one of the first hymns that I ever seen in my church when I lived in Las Cruces, New Mexico, thanks again from the very bottom of my heart, you have done an outstanding job and my heart is truly blessed. I love you in Christ, my dear sister. Patricia .

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Patricia, we have talked so much today and I have enjoyed every correspondence. Like I said, you have blessed me with your story, your words and your quick response. I am thanking God today for this sweet friendship he has brought into my life.

    I know we have known each other before now, but when God decides on something He makes it truly special. And that you are. So very special.
    God bless you sweet friend and I hope you had the best birthday ever.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Debi, this is an excellent poem for Patricia. I have received her reviews, which are always good to read. I did not know all this about her. It sounds like she has had a wonderful life, and we are all better for knowing her. Well done, Terry.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you so very much, Terry. Gosh, I appreciate your kind comments for Patricia and her poem. She really is quite the lady, isn't she?
    Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi