Comment from JSD

Excellent

Very sweet. Might just be the sort of thing to catch the committee's eye! Who knows. Your rhyme is fun and your three part structure is neat and effective. Bit too cutesy for me, but I bet your family will love it!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

I get it John! Love just made-me temporarily cutsie!, but not A Committee contest- its a voting one, so you have a chance to keep me out! LOL
I still think you're sweet though! Have a great Day!

reply by JSD on 10-Sep-2023

Oh, so it is. I'm in it too! I bet you'll beat me. We are chalk and cheese!

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023

You are the chalk, I am the cheese
You do the talk, I people please
You are no jerk, you are no fool
I love your work, I think you're cool. Lol....

reply by JSD on 12-Sep-2023

Much lollage.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent love poem. Very unique and petsiñalized.I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and imagery.

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023

Alex, I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Very beautiful poem, and indeed a mom it's a gift from heaven. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest. " hope you know, I've thought this through

Please marry me and I'll be true

What God has blessed, we can't undo

We are now one, we once were two"

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023

Dear Iza, I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!