Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

There you go again! You've paid a tremendous tribute to Nomi, who I really haven't gotten to know in my short time back.
The few readings/ reviews we've exchanged , he is a gentlemen beyond belief.
He's lucky to have you in his corner!
As always... well you know!
John

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from nomi338

Exceptional

I wish that you could se the big ole grin spread across my face. You have more kind things about me than I am used to seeing not on an obituary. I truly believe that you leave an impression on everyone that you interact with. So, why in God's holy name would you not care about the impression you make and leave. With that thought in mind, I try very hard to be as nice and as interesting as I can be. I cannot thank you enough for the kindness you have always shown me. I love you with much of my heart, I have to reserve some for everyone else.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

So Sorry I am just replying now Nomi. But now that gives you a chance to read it again, because I always have to keep changing until I think it is as good as it might get. I am so glad you liked it, but think it is better now that I changed a few things.
Happy birthday again and I hope you had the best one ever, my sweet and wonderful big brother!!!!!!

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

And I forgot to say the obvious too, and that is how much I love you too!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love nomi! he always gives the wittiest yet thought-provoking reviews!


this was a great birthday poem for him!

smooth rhyme and flow with a fun feeling - i have no suggestions


thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

Debi, as our Baptist Preacher used to say..."Can somebody just give me an Amen?" Well, Amen to you and Nomi. He is also a very smart guy with great insights. From reading his writings, one learns quickly he is an honorable man. Outstanding, Terry.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from Caitriona

Excellent

Sincere and sweet. I love the flow, the literal viewpoint and of course, "Nomi" must be one cool dude. Really enjoyed this one and the positivity it brings to the virtual community.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

birthday are always a memorable day. it was kind and sweet of you to think of a friend on fanstory. your poem was spot on and it was a great write. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

What a nice rhyming poem. Happy birthday to Nolan. I like that you repeated the line throughout. I have recently discovered him here. His writing is very funny. No holds barred. You always manage to shine a light on these special people. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Wow, that's a lovely eightieth birthday greeting to Nomi. What a lovely tribute you've written to this lovely writer. Thank you so much for sharing this, Debi. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

You did an awesome job with your birthday card to Nomi.
I liked the rhymes, the repeated line, the smooth flow, but
most of all, the praise you gave him for being such a kind
and caring gentleman, Debi. He is all of what you stated and
so much more. He is a great asset to FS and role model to
others. You were so kind and thoughtful to write this for him.
Thank you for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, I must agree with all of this Debi. Yes, he is a good man who loves God with all his heart, there is a light that shines in him that is hard to ignore, so good ond you for honouring this godly man, as always your prophetic and perceptive flair is glowing with God's light, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023