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Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a very cute and well written birthday poem for Jan! You used very cute and happy words rhyming words and very neat imagery. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


How are you doing these days my friend?

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Teri.. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is a very sweet tribute to a fellow member. Happy Birthday Jan!

The rhymes are great
and I always enjoy learning more about my fellow members of Fanstory.

Thanks for making that happen!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Douglas. You are so kind and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Douglas Goff on 23-Nov-2022
    Thank you! You have such a wonderful warm spirit!
Comment from aryr
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What a great picture, Debi. I loved you words, they were absolutely priceless. It was a wonderful tribute to Jan and to Abby, her soulmate. Great job, well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Alie. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by aryr on 25-Nov-2022
    You are so welcome, Debi. God has blessed me by knowing you.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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I love the humor of the growing question marks throughout the poem. So nice of you to mark Jan's special day with your lovely thoughts. Love the rhymes also. Thanks for sharing, & happy birthday wishes to Jan.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Carol. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 24-Nov-2022
    Thanks for your sweet words and your friendship as well. Hope your Thanksgiving is lovely. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully written tribute to Jan. I am a friend of hers and she just gave me oodles of help yesterday on my first Haiku attempt. She is a wonderful person. I enjoy reading.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Barb. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Zue65
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The repetitive question marks intensified the message of the author and it helped to progress the author's message in those flowing poetic lines. Your friendship and loyalty to Jan is evident in this poem. An excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Nassus. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, Debi, you are so sweet to craft such a beautiful birthday poem for our Jannypan! I'm over the moon for her as we share a love for Astronomy and for FanStory and members like you. ;))

Dear Jan, Happy Birthday! You're a bright star in our atmosphere! Shine on! Love and blessings to you on your birthday and always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Sally. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. I am just finding out that you and Jan both love Astronomy. You don't mean like horoscopes, do you? And I too marvel at the solar system and think to myself, how could anyone doubt the existence of a Perfect God? How could there be any other explanation for such awesomeness?? Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Sally Law on 23-Nov-2022
    No, Astronomy is the appreciation and study of the heavens, stars, constellations and sky; astrology is about consulting horoscopes about how to live, which to me is devoid of God. My opinion in a nutshell. Blessings,
    Sal XOs
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Aha, I figured that because I feel the same way. Thanks
    Sweetheart!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is so lovely, Debi, and I know she'll love it ... she won't give up her birth year though!! LOL I didn't know it was Jan's Birthday today, so I'm glad you've told us. I think she is an amazing, kind lady, and I like to think of her as my friend. Well done, Debi. And Happy Birthday, Jan! xxxx Sandra

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Sandra. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. You were one of my first interactions here, so it truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 23-Nov-2022
    Aw, Debi, you are so kind, how can I not be your friend, it's me who has to thank you for befriending me. You are special, my friend. Happy Thanksgiving, to you and yours! xxxx
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Just like Debi to commend someone else and their works.

What a sweet ode of adulation to another wonderful FanStorian. So many nice things you had to say but I especially liked.

I've never seen a picture, but I'm sure she'd look like love

What "look" does love have? I am sure you share that same look with Jan.

Very nice Debi. Great rhyming, good bounce, easily read and very understandable. I really enjoyed this early morning pick-me-up.

Thanks Debi

Gary M

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    Gary, I am so appreciative of your very kind review and comments for my poem for Jan's birthday. You always make me feel so special and I don't even have words to tell you what that means to me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
    May all of God's blessings that brought you through this horrible health scare, be your greatest cause for giving thanks today. I know it is very high on my list as well. So thankful for your friendship and to have you back here with us. Have a wonderful day with family!
reply by GARY MACLEAN on 29-Nov-2022
    I like your new picture. It really shows your true heart and who you are.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-Your notes and poem are appreciated.
-You did a good job with it, and I wonder if Jan was surprised?
-You show many of her good qualities, and defer about her age.
-It makes a good repeating line.
-The second verse highlights the causes important to her.
-Good description of her love of her cat, and a lovely verse that follows that.
-Very good concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Pam. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Nov-2022
    You are very welcome, Debi, and a very Happy Thanksgiving for you and your family, too. Your friendship is special, as well.