Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Seasons"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from June Sargent
Sad, but true. The old bones are hurting as temps are dropping. 39 degrees this morning. Summer is over and I yearn for spring. I enjoyed your piece for the club challenge. I think I'll give it a shot my self.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Sad, but true. The old bones are hurting as temps are dropping. 39 degrees this morning. Summer is over and I yearn for spring. I enjoyed your piece for the club challenge. I think I'll give it a shot my self.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you Jane, we have to hunker down until we cast eyes on the crocus and daisies indicating warm sun returns in spring.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Lovely poem to showcase the change in seasons.
Sparkling in your poem: Fall does not have spring in its step, so old bones imagery works well.
My favourite line:
- I ripen like leaves tones, Fall hath arrived...old bones, showing cycles of life, change and its effects.
A lovely outdoorsy poem.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Lovely poem to showcase the change in seasons.
Sparkling in your poem: Fall does not have spring in its step, so old bones imagery works well.
My favourite line:
- I ripen like leaves tones, Fall hath arrived...old bones, showing cycles of life, change and its effects.
A lovely outdoorsy poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you Marie.