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Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
This is a fun poem.... yes, it's filled with laughs. I enjoyed each line and the fun rhymes. Thanks for sharing your "insight" into so many FS friends.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is a fun poem.... yes, it's filled with laughs. I enjoyed each line and the fun rhymes. Thanks for sharing your "insight" into so many FS friends.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Hi Katie, thanks very much and I hope you had a good time there. This time I wanted to get all that review so often as just wasn't sure about doing any more contests, so thanks for the fun review my dear friend!
Comment from Michaela Moore
This is really cute! Frovolaty, fun, and a little girlish drama is thrown in just to mix the perfect party! Time with women friends is the best, and I think you show a slice of this phenomenon perfectly.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is really cute! Frovolaty, fun, and a little girlish drama is thrown in just to mix the perfect party! Time with women friends is the best, and I think you show a slice of this phenomenon perfectly.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Michaela, I knew I'd forget a few. I spent more time trying to remember everyone of my reviewer friends. I will get you next time Sweetie! Thanks for your kind words for it my friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this fun poem, Debi. I enjoyed reading
it. The picture was perfect for your well thought out words. I liked
the color scheme and the smooth flow and rhymes. As I was reading,
I didn't even think about words for a contest. I liked the situations
the FS girls were in and how you played up each one. I knew
every one of the FS members. The ending was a twist, and you led
up t it well.
Take care, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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You did a great job with this fun poem, Debi. I enjoyed reading
it. The picture was perfect for your well thought out words. I liked
the color scheme and the smooth flow and rhymes. As I was reading,
I didn't even think about words for a contest. I liked the situations
the FS girls were in and how you played up each one. I knew
every one of the FS members. The ending was a twist, and you led
up t it well.
Take care, Jan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Jan, guess what. At first when I wrote this, you were the host, not the one that pushes Margaret in the pool.. But as it turned out, I needed all the one syllable names I could get to go with the longer names. At least you got to be the dumper and not the dumper. Lol! Thanks for your kind words my sweet friend!
Comment from Terry Broxson
What a hoot! This sounds like a fun party. Too bad none of the old guys couldn't attend. On the other hand,I don't think we could have added t the creativity of the group or the writing! Very fun! Terry.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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What a hoot! This sounds like a fun party. Too bad none of the old guys couldn't attend. On the other hand,I don't think we could have added t the creativity of the group or the writing! Very fun! Terry.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Now if I can just get out of this hospital, I can get thru my therapy and learn the cha cha cha! Thanks for the great comments and Guys weren't invited cause I couldn't fit any more names in a line.haha! I finally got to all my female friends, as I probably feel for the contests to be over.just like you and the interviews. Did I tell you that I got a review from Tom for my poem for him. I have to send it to you, as you will get a kick,out of it.
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I did read your poem, that?s cool he responded. Get well, I want to see a picture of you on the dance floor!
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New Year's Eve!
My eyes are on the prize!
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Tom's reply is very funny. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
How lovely of Margaret to invite all of us!! I feel honored to be among such a fun group of writing ladies. And I learned to do the chachacha!! Thank you for writing and injecting some humor and camaraderie here!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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How lovely of Margaret to invite all of us!! I feel honored to be among such a fun group of writing ladies. And I learned to do the chachacha!! Thank you for writing and injecting some humor and camaraderie here!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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And thank you for helping me see where the line gets drawn. I have been inhaling too many hospital fumes! Haha! Did you know everyone there?
I'm pretty happy that Sally taught us both to do the cha cha cha. I just got an incredible review from Frank so that perked me up too. But anyway I will tell them in therapy they have to have me dancing by Christmas. I maybe going home this week.wasn't sure if I told you.
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I'm thrilled to hear that you will be able to get back home this week! That will speed up your healing, too! Praise the Lord! And oh, Debi, you know more people than I do in the short time you've been on Fanstory! What a popular gal you are! 💖
Comment from John Ciarmello
It's so nice to see this fictional gathering! I thought it was hilarious and learned so much about the ladies' various personalities. I loved this one, Debi. I'm sure all the ladies you mentioned here took it in stride and are laughing still. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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It's so nice to see this fictional gathering! I thought it was hilarious and learned so much about the ladies' various personalities. I loved this one, Debi. I'm sure all the ladies you mentioned here took it in stride and are laughing still. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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I don't know John, I just posted it. I'm just hoping they see that it is not anything personal. Everything was fictional. So many wanted to have a part in these FS contests so I took all my favorite's who review my work and thought I would do it. I hope no one will be offended. But if they are I will take them out or change it. I do appreciate your kind review my awesome friend!
Thanks John!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
What a fun poem about the ladies here. For sure everyone knows it's done in jest. The large text is on point. The poem is cute and funny. Thanks for sharing. Hope you are slowly getting better.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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What a fun poem about the ladies here. For sure everyone knows it's done in jest. The large text is on point. The poem is cute and funny. Thanks for sharing. Hope you are slowly getting better.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks Sweetie! Lol, Hope you had fun at the party. I tried to get all my favs in one!
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You are welcome. Hope you are doing well. Sorry, I wasn't at the party. LOL
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Yes you were! The author of the silly poem is still inhaling hospital fumes and accidentally wrote the name Sharon instead of Sandra. Your there now! Thfsnks for telling me, as I wanted all my favorites there
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It's okay either way. Just get better.
Comment from Frank Malley
In this era of gender contests, women can be very defensive and aggressive about how they are perceived. However, both males and females have personalities, foibles, and features, and this excellent funny poem puts some of the eccentric features of female humanity
on the table for a laugh. And, since no males are present in this get-together, the funny particulars are enjoyed without the critical eyes males watching.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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In this era of gender contests, women can be very defensive and aggressive about how they are perceived. However, both males and females have personalities, foibles, and features, and this excellent funny poem puts some of the eccentric features of female humanity
on the table for a laugh. And, since no males are present in this get-together, the funny particulars are enjoyed without the critical eyes males watching.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks Frank, I needed that right now and I appreciate you so very much Frank! Thank you for your kind words my dear friend!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a silly poem, but I enjoyed reading it. I hope you don't get in trouble for naming all those ladies in your writing. I found it amusing to read. I look forward to more of your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is a silly poem, but I enjoyed reading it. I hope you don't get in trouble for naming all those ladies in your writing. I found it amusing to read. I look forward to more of your writings.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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One thing about people here is that everyone loves the attention, and this was so fictional that I placed the characters by how they best fit in the lines. There was nothing personal about this. For anyone who Reviews my work,and if I had even a first name, I tried to include them. But Imhavent seen you Sweetie for a long time. Thank you so much your kind words and for poppin in.
Comment from Raul1
There is a little bit of everything going on with the FanStory girls. I like how you made this poem and it is positive. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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There is a little bit of everything going on with the FanStory girls. I like how you made this poem and it is positive. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thank you Raul! You are so kind and I surely appreciate your kind words
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You're welcome!