Poppy and Odi's Mission
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Comment from nomi338
Teamwork, really does make the dream work. Willing hands working in concert can accomplish almost any task no matter hoe difficult. This appealing story does much to show the value of cooperation, a willing attitude and the joy of working together as a team. All lessons that should last the human kids for a lifetime. Wonderful story. Yay!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Teamwork, really does make the dream work. Willing hands working in concert can accomplish almost any task no matter hoe difficult. This appealing story does much to show the value of cooperation, a willing attitude and the joy of working together as a team. All lessons that should last the human kids for a lifetime. Wonderful story. Yay!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Nomi! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
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It was truly a pleasure. Bless you.
Comment from Teri7
Sandra, This is a very cute and very well written chapter using the Cube 16. You used very good descriptive words and very neat pictures. You are a great children's writer. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Sandra, This is a very cute and very well written chapter using the Cube 16. You used very good descriptive words and very neat pictures. You are a great children's writer. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this amazing review, Teri, and the lovely golden star! I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. (Thanks for that lovely compliment, too!!) Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Finally! The poor whale gets relief! I'm so thrilled for him.
Congrats on finishing this epic whale tale. I live how the other sea creatures got in on it and everybody helped.
Thiscteminds me of the story of the child who pulled the nail from the Lion's paw. Or was it another animal....I can th remember but I loved the story as a kid.
Looking forward to your next project and keep us posted on you success with poppy and Odi's mission.
Sincerely,
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Finally! The poor whale gets relief! I'm so thrilled for him.
Congrats on finishing this epic whale tale. I live how the other sea creatures got in on it and everybody helped.
Thiscteminds me of the story of the child who pulled the nail from the Lion's paw. Or was it another animal....I can th remember but I loved the story as a kid.
Looking forward to your next project and keep us posted on you success with poppy and Odi's mission.
Sincerely,
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Yes, the whale is a happy chappie now!! Lol. Thank you so much for this wonderful review of the whole story, Katiemae, and the golden sixth star, that was so nice of you. I will let everyone know how it does, and show you all the cover when I've finished doing it. Thanks for all your encouragement, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Non-Fiction Writing Contest
Hello, this poem story is Wonderful... I love the cartoons and pictures... Did you make them? Looks like some type of photoshop...is great. The story has a good plot and character development. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Non-Fiction Writing Contest
Hello, this poem story is Wonderful... I love the cartoons and pictures... Did you make them? Looks like some type of photoshop...is great. The story has a good plot and character development. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Gypsy! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from June Sargent
This was a great adventure - not just for kids, but also us adults. The cube format made it very appealing and easy to read. I know this will be a sure success. Best wishes on publishing it. And I hope you have more coming down the pike!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This was a great adventure - not just for kids, but also us adults. The cube format made it very appealing and easy to read. I know this will be a sure success. Best wishes on publishing it. And I hope you have more coming down the pike!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, June, and the golden sixth star! I love the Cube, it's so easy for children to read it. I've tested it out already!! Lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a very enjoyable story and I'm sure children will love it. I'm glad he whale got his tooth out, too. I haven't tried this form before but maybe I will.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This is a very enjoyable story and I'm sure children will love it. I'm glad he whale got his tooth out, too. I haven't tried this form before but maybe I will.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Mary! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
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You are welcome. Hugs right back to you! Have a great day.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice poetic tale for kids. All of it reads very easily and smooth. This is just right for the really young ones. Good luck on the publishing end of things.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Very nice poetic tale for kids. All of it reads very easily and smooth. This is just right for the really young ones. Good luck on the publishing end of things.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Paul! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed this story and am glad the whale was relieved of his toothache. I like the characters you created and this is a delightful children's book. The poetic cube form is perfect for the story. Excellent poetic form and a story to be read again and again.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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I enjoyed this story and am glad the whale was relieved of his toothache. I like the characters you created and this is a delightful children's book. The poetic cube form is perfect for the story. Excellent poetic form and a story to be read again and again.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from damommy
Hurray! The awful tooth is gone, thanks to all the friends who came to help. Don't you know how relieved the whale is to be rid of it! This is such a cute story. Good luck with your publishing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hurray! The awful tooth is gone, thanks to all the friends who came to help. Don't you know how relieved the whale is to be rid of it! This is such a cute story. Good luck with your publishing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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The whale's tooth has gone, and so has mine!! LOL. Thank you, dearest sister, sorry I'm so late replying. As soon as I posted this, my grandchildren came for an unexpected pop in, lol. My granddaughter brought Eric over and we had some fun. I had Eric reading to me one of the stories I wrote for him. He's getting much better since going to the special needs school. I'm so proud of him.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, and for the golden star!! Now to sort it out for publishing! I might be able to have a chat tomorrow, I've a visitor coming on Wednesday until Sunday, so I'd like to try and have a chat with you before she comes. Are you around tomorrow?
Love and hugs, dear SATP :)) Sandra xxxxx
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I'll be here tomorrow. Glad you had a nice visit with grandchildren. See you tomorrow.
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That will be lovely! It will be so nice to chat again. Love you! xxxx
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Did you make the pictures? They are incredible and go so well with this. When you put the book together are you going to include the information of the Sea Whip somewhere in it? I think it'd be great if you did. There is so much out there that we don't know exists.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Did you make the pictures? They are incredible and go so well with this. When you put the book together are you going to include the information of the Sea Whip somewhere in it? I think it'd be great if you did. There is so much out there that we don't know exists.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review! The pictures are mainly from Pixabay.com. It's a site with loads of illustrations for any subject. They allow you to 'doctor them' and use for commercial use. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx