The Bella Donna
pining with unrequited love32 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What an excellently done free verse telling the untimely passing and reoccuring performance each year. Very well told in descriptive words and i truly loved this one.
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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What an excellently done free verse telling the untimely passing and reoccuring performance each year. Very well told in descriptive words and i truly loved this one.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much Barb!
Comment from Sugarray77
I liked the personification of a wraith and the back story about this pining character, who dies in the dramatic musical embrace. Well done on crafting this entry, Jim. It is perfect for the Picture This. :)
Melissa
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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I liked the personification of a wraith and the back story about this pining character, who dies in the dramatic musical embrace. Well done on crafting this entry, Jim. It is perfect for the Picture This. :)
Melissa
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, good friend. I hope to engage in the next class and share more with you, Jim