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Comment from Kerry Foley
lol. A fantastic flash fiction, Bill. All that work and you just wanted to feed the birds.
Great humor in this silly little story. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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lol. A fantastic flash fiction, Bill. All that work and you just wanted to feed the birds.
Great humor in this silly little story. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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This is actually a true story except I still feed the birds. Thank you for excellent review.
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lol, that's so funny. heh-heh.
Comment from nomi338
You stopped too soon, if you had kept it up, you could have had a menagerie and maybe later a zoo. to catch a rat you need cheese. To catch a cat, you need a rat, to catch a dog, you need a cat, and so on and so forth. Pay attention Bill.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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You stopped too soon, if you had kept it up, you could have had a menagerie and maybe later a zoo. to catch a rat you need cheese. To catch a cat, you need a rat, to catch a dog, you need a cat, and so on and so forth. Pay attention Bill.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I also caught snails, a bat, and myself.
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HMBAILOL + Holding My Belly As I Laugh Out Loud.
Comment from Insignificant Weed
Good grief! The mouse or rat could have at least shown up! The list of animals is very enlightening and full or surprises. Oh, no! But then the author decided NOT to feed the birds! Well, I guess it did solve the problem. This entry is worth a five star rating for the structure and flow of the story. It humorously captured a problem that many bird lovers face.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Good grief! The mouse or rat could have at least shown up! The list of animals is very enlightening and full or surprises. Oh, no! But then the author decided NOT to feed the birds! Well, I guess it did solve the problem. This entry is worth a five star rating for the structure and flow of the story. It humorously captured a problem that many bird lovers face.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thanks, IW, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I know what you mean. We used to keep birdseed in the garage until the same thing happened. Now we keep it in the house, but mice come in after it. They live under the dishwasher, and we can see them running back and forth to the dog's food dish. We gave up. Let them have it and feed their young. Mice are harmless, just make a mess. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I know what you mean. We used to keep birdseed in the garage until the same thing happened. Now we keep it in the house, but mice come in after it. They live under the dishwasher, and we can see them running back and forth to the dog's food dish. We gave up. Let them have it and feed their young. Mice are harmless, just make a mess. :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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My wife can't live in a house with mice in it -- so I never tell her about them.
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LOL! Good plan! We used to catch them in traps but got too tiring. Only see about one per day. Not so bad. :)
Comment from robyn corum
hahahaha! The question is -- did you ever feed BIRDS to begin with?
What a fun poem, Bill, and a super entry into this 100-word contest. These are not easy, yet you made this look simple - like child's play, actually.
Thanks for sharing and much good luck to you!
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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hahahaha! The question is -- did you ever feed BIRDS to begin with?
What a fun poem, Bill, and a super entry into this 100-word contest. These are not easy, yet you made this look simple - like child's play, actually.
Thanks for sharing and much good luck to you!
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I'm probably guilty of making mice obese.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Garage War Control was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly with Theme.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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"Garage War Control was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly with Theme.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Dr. Ricky