Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

This is the first time I've caught your story, I'll go back and catch up. This is really well written, and has so much potential. I know several people on FS who can probably relate to it too. I cannot imagine how tough it must be to give up drugs the addiction must be terrible. Well done, I'll fan you so don't miss a part. :) sandra xx

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Hi Sandra;
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your willingness to follow Gary's story. I'm very intrigued by the subject because I have a son who is struggling and finding a way to get into rehab - Gary is my beacon of hope.j

I hope you enjoy the other stories and I appreciate the new fan!
~patty~

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Patty,

Very interesting chapter of your story. I did enjoy it and thought it was put together very well. I did see just a couple of places that needed edits, though:

1.) Gary, like everyone else, was just still (leery) of people.

2.) He felt like maybe he could open up/a bit today.

Thanks and good luck!



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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Hi Robyn;
Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments, and for pointing out the errors. (I already did the edits.)
Gary's story continues to intrigue me, and it is my intent for the book to have a good outcome and be a journey of hope.
~patty~