Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

This is an awesome air poem! So hard to write in 3-5-3....but your choices of words....have made yours stand out! Awesome! Good luck, blessings...

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thanks! Glad you liked this windy/stormy 'air' poem. Appreciate all your comment. And .... congratulations on winning the 'ABC' Site contest. Way to go. Cheers ... ;-)

reply by Irish Rain on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you!!!!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Take away the palm trees & water & you have my hometown.

I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the correct syllable counts per line. Love the picture--the only way to see wind is by observing its results.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this windy/stormy poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;)

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Very nice 3-5-3 "air" poem about the force of the wind. It can be gentle as a breeze or whip around like a tornado. You show the wind as it whips into a storm against the trees. I liked your poem.

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks. Glad you liked this windy/stormy poem. Appreciate your comments ... ;)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I personally think a three/five/three is too short to be a grammatical sentence, much less a poem. But given the prompt, your art and words give a taste of a hurricane coming ashore. Excellent.

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks. Appreciate your comments on this short, windy/stormy piece. These 3-5-3's are a real challenge.
Cheers ... ;-)