Comment from Fatima Aliyeva

Average

I have read this poem and I have really enjoyed it.The picture which was chosen also was interesting for me.Please keep writing stories and poems for children.

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you for reviewing and the kind remarks. 8-)

Comment from Kassa-Leigh

Excellent

This is so cute! I am a fan of your work, now, because you make ideas flow through the minds of little ones. You should write a book of these poems, if you haven't already done that. I saw no mistakes and I enjoyed it very much.
Cheryl-Lynette

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you very much. What kind comments. I appreciate it.

I'm happy you like it, and a really appreciate your support and interest. 8-)

Comment from Lancer1979

Exceptional

A million thank you's for sharing this with me today! I've had a really rough week and this put a smile on my face. You are planning on compiling all these wonderful gems and sending them to a publisher, aren't you? If not, you really should! :D

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you for your lovely review, but mostly for your support. That means a lot. thank you for the 6!

I'm sorry you had a tough week. Want to talk about it? 8-)

reply by Lancer1979 on 09-Apr-2016

The "6" was well deserved, Yvonne! Just trying to process some stuff. I'm okay. Maybe I'll write something and share it over the weeked. :D

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Any time. My email is yuzzell@sbcglobal.net
8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 11-Apr-2016

Any time. My email is yuzzell@sbcglobal.net
8-)

Comment from trumby

Excellent

I paint like this too, Only I don't paint pictures, I paint walls on houses.
I do contract renovation jobs on houses.
I also do mowing, gardening and clean-up jobs.
I'm sure that kids would love this story.
I don't know of a single kid wo doesn't like making a mess

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

That's true. However, I paint like Wally. When I try to paint a wall, I get more on me than on the wall. Truly!

Thank you for your nice review. 8-)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

A wonderful rhyming children's poem about Wally the Weasel. I like the colors you include in the poem. I think Wally does make people think more kindly about weasels. Great job!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you I hope so. I appreciate your comments. 8-)

reply by MelB on 09-Apr-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You are on a roll tonight, Yvonne. This one is really good too. The tempo in this is exceptional and it flows so smoothly it is really a fun read. I love the image of this little guy painting his tail off lol

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2016

Thank you. I thought I'd give it another try posting my work.

I'm happy you like it. It was fun.

Good to hear from you. 8-)

reply by Douglas Paul on 09-Apr-2016

Glad to see you back and posting. I have always liked your work

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Bless your heart. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 11-Apr-2016

Bless your heart. 8-)

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

Thank you.

reply by Anonymous Member on 13-Apr-2016

Thank you.

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016

Thank you. I'm glad you can see it, too. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you. I'm glad you can see it, too. 8-)