Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Weirdly fascinating. Strangely addictive .
It's not often I enjoy sifi or fantasy being a realist but this one is great
In fact it needs a high recreating it's brilliant
My grandson is working his first real job in a laboratory during the second semester of his five year uni course in genetic chemistry. Should I warn him about the Greeks and the Trojan alien...

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thank you, Petal, for the very nice review. Bill

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

You sure can do creepy! This was right out of "Alien." I love how you went back and forth between different realities and that surprise ending. You do so much with a very short work and make every word count. Again, stellar work!

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thank you, em, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Poor Darren! What a terrible deal he had. I enjoyed reading your story it is funny in a dark sort of way. It is well written and the format and the picture go well with the story.

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thank you, GBR, for the excellent review. Bill