Senryu. Sorrow
One tear21 total reviews
Comment from JB Lynn
Nice detail of "one sweet tear" and the final concept really hits home. Although the reason for what is left a bit arbitrary, I think that's okay. It makes the reader wonder about what happened between these two. And there is no denying that deep emotion is happening, here. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Nice detail of "one sweet tear" and the final concept really hits home. Although the reason for what is left a bit arbitrary, I think that's okay. It makes the reader wonder about what happened between these two. And there is no denying that deep emotion is happening, here. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2014