Comment from krys123

Excellent

I really loved your sentiment and imaginative ideals of how love affects each and every one of us. From early on to the end of our days love is intertwined in our lives and after we are gone it will go on in effect others until the end of time. Thank you so much for sharing your piece with everyone including myself. May you May you have a good one in God bless.
Alex

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Alex, I always appreciate and enjoy the comments you make regarding my writing. Your continued support and encouragement mean a lot to me. Thank you, Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 25-Jan-2014

You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn. I try myself to be truthful, honest and sincere with my reviews unless I don't know what they mean than it's usually an emotional poem.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Lovely presentation of your poem
bring one's soul to its knees - add the apostrophe for possessive
son's first letter - add apostrophe
great illustrative examples
to depict various kinds of love
grip of winter's bonds - add the apostrophe
good touches of alliteration in phrases like last for a lifetime
and greater good
It's those all-encompassing virtues - I added the apostrophe for the contraction it it is and I added the hyphen
a very thoughtful poem
Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thanks for the through review, edits and comments. I always appreciate your keen eye Brooke, :-) Carolyn

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

What a nice free verse prose you wrote NAM Very moving thought provoking piece..Your work is always a pleasure to read as you write for others to enjoy not only for yourself..That meaning one can understand what your talking about without having to read it 4 times and still being confused
tk

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

What a wonderful review, I appreciate each comment left with such sincerity. Thank you TK, I trust all is well with you and Ginger. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

amazing image drawn in these words just flows within the mind beautiful waiting to be tamed by gentle caress and kisses without abandon But in a myriad of emotions which can bring ones soul to its knees excellently penned piece

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you for this awesome review.. :-) Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

THE REAL MEANING OF GIVING OF ONES LOVE, THIS IS WHAT MAKES THE WORLD GO AROUND. MAKING PEOPLE SEE WHAT THE CAN ACCOMPLISH IF THEY PUT THEIR LOVE OF ONE ANOTHER INTO IT.UNITY IS THEY NAME SAY IT THE LORD.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

What great comments, thank you so much. :-) Carolyn

reply by country ranch writer on 24-Jan-2014

WELCOME

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good descriptive word use that creates a clear image in my mind. The description allows me to feel the impact of the words written. Good alliteration. Strong emotion. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with passion.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

I appreciate your comments, thank you, :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, Carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the deep seeded love that produces a harvest of giving. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thanks for the comments and well wishes, :-) Carolyn

Comment from dancerwriter

Excellent

A very well shown and dramatic piece of writing.Everything is no doubt true but how many of those mentioned hearts, either of men or those who love could live up to these amazing tributes, talents and virtues.The third verse is wonderful in its content, and easy to understand. Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thanks Leslie for this wonderful review and insightful comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Simple fabulous, WOW, you have outdone yourself on this one. Oh this is so very beautiful and makes for a true Valentines Day poem contest entry. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thanks, It is not my usual style but the way this one had to come out. :-) Carolyn

Comment from amahra

Excellent

what an unusual art work you chose. I really love it for this writing. The poem was awesome. Wonderful free style and great presentation.

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you for this wonderful review and rating, I am delighted you liked The heart of love. :-) Carolyn