To Cherish Thorns
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Comment from country ranch writer
When you smile people wonder what you are up to so you just keep on smiling and carrying on like you haven't a care in the world
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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When you smile people wonder what you are up to so you just keep on smiling and carrying on like you haven't a care in the world
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Yep. They figure something must be going right or why are you smiling!!
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I used to tell them you will never know what I am up to for it will be a big surprise when it does. Also I used to go around singing you're gonna miss me when I am gone. It used to drive them crazy.
Comment from Sasha
My goodness, I think we have all been there at least once (okay, maybe three or for times) and it isn't fun, is it. To love someone that doesn't love you back is painful, but to love someone who doesn't even know you exist is even worse. Terrific job with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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My goodness, I think we have all been there at least once (okay, maybe three or for times) and it isn't fun, is it. To love someone that doesn't love you back is painful, but to love someone who doesn't even know you exist is even worse. Terrific job with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Glad you liked it. Yeah. I hate the waving at someone that isn't waving at you thing the most. What a dumb feeling. Ha! Oh well, more to write about!! mikey
Comment from jmdg1954
Sure, I guess if one is pining over a girl (at any age) you could walk into a room in a gorilla suit and she probably would never notice.
Some girls are like that...
Nicely composed and a great photo to accompany your writing.
John
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Sure, I guess if one is pining over a girl (at any age) you could walk into a room in a gorilla suit and she probably would never notice.
Some girls are like that...
Nicely composed and a great photo to accompany your writing.
John
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Yep. Glad you liked it. I like the gorilla suit idea though. Never tried that. Hmmm.......
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is awesome! Bravo! You've nailed it here. Not just the insecurity around the girl, but I think it applies to good fortune in general. We get our hopes up, only to feel foolish when we're made to feel like losers.
Happens to everyone, I think. In fact, take a good look at Bill Gates... you KNOW he hadda be easy prey for bullies in school. But one day fortune WASN'T just joking. You never know till you try. :)
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This is awesome! Bravo! You've nailed it here. Not just the insecurity around the girl, but I think it applies to good fortune in general. We get our hopes up, only to feel foolish when we're made to feel like losers.
Happens to everyone, I think. In fact, take a good look at Bill Gates... you KNOW he hadda be easy prey for bullies in school. But one day fortune WASN'T just joking. You never know till you try. :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Yep. We all went to school with someone like Bill Gates that all the cheerleaders WISH they had married. Oh well, they will have to be satisfied with pies. Glad you liked this. Thank you so much!! mikey
Comment from Sankey
Good one mate. Where did the hideous picture come from?
Interesting poem. Some good stuff to chew on for a while.
Thanks again matey.
Only one spag I think. "maybe(')s"
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Good one mate. Where did the hideous picture come from?
Interesting poem. Some good stuff to chew on for a while.
Thanks again matey.
Only one spag I think. "maybe(')s"
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Bing images. Hahaha. A cutey pie huh. A fun one.
Comment from MoIronE13
That is brilliant Mickey....
The image looks like "Buddha after eating to much Curry...LOL
Words can't describe your words
They way you worded them
I sure can't!
Can you?
I'd pick a few lines out normally and praise the HELL out of them
But why?
You already know they "ROCK"
Love you brother
Like no Other!
Mahina 2014
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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That is brilliant Mickey....
The image looks like "Buddha after eating to much Curry...LOL
Words can't describe your words
They way you worded them
I sure can't!
Can you?
I'd pick a few lines out normally and praise the HELL out of them
But why?
You already know they "ROCK"
Love you brother
Like no Other!
Mahina 2014
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Hahaha! That is exactly what it looks like. Glad you liked this. Great review. I am off on the shuttle to visit my stars!!! mikey
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Drop me a Star or two while your "shuttlin"