The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A cold is a cold (Lunatika) "'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
31 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
Man gets the same cold
Terminal illness
Your words and artwork brought back my smiling face.
Well done in this difficult format.
Good luck and be blessed.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Man gets the same cold
Terminal illness
Your words and artwork brought back my smiling face.
Well done in this difficult format.
Good luck and be blessed.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks for such a great review of this one, I am glad it made you smile. Carolyn
Comment from NicciFaye
Very true and very funny....they go from man to little boys! lol excellent Carolyn. A great poem and a great reason to see how strong women truly are!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Very true and very funny....they go from man to little boys! lol excellent Carolyn. A great poem and a great reason to see how strong women truly are!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Glad you can relate, thanks for the great comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from The Death
Heehe...There you go..Women of substance I should say.
I am really upset with this one..Lol..You thought it out very well and worded it nicely.It is all about being immune.
Good luck:)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Heehe...There you go..Women of substance I should say.
I am really upset with this one..Lol..You thought it out very well and worded it nicely.It is all about being immune.
Good luck:)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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It is satire so glad you found it funny. But soooooooooo sorry I upset you. It is what it is! LOL As I wrote in my notes, I am NOT going to let Larry read this one. Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I think you did a top notch job in writing this Lunaticka poem. Maybe I'll try my hand on it one day. What you say in it is true. Men can't seem to handle any kind of sickness like us women. LOL
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
I think you did a top notch job in writing this Lunaticka poem. Maybe I'll try my hand on it one day. What you say in it is true. Men can't seem to handle any kind of sickness like us women. LOL
Kat
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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So glad you enjoyed this one Kat. I seem to have struck a common thread here with us women. :-) Even the men have enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from AprilShower
This certainly is the truth, notesandmore. However, I've seen the opposite when something really serious comes along. That's when men are very brave. That's when they act like it's nothing. This is well said.
April :o)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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This certainly is the truth, notesandmore. However, I've seen the opposite when something really serious comes along. That's when men are very brave. That's when they act like it's nothing. This is well said.
April :o)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Have to have a little fun and add a bit of 'satire', you are right, I always lean on Larry's strength. (Just not when he has a cold. LOL) April, hope you are having a great day, Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
That is a question women have asked for years. Men or worst than little children when they are 'sick'. You've hit the nail right on the head. This is an excellent contest entry. The picture is a definite plus.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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That is a question women have asked for years. Men or worst than little children when they are 'sick'. You've hit the nail right on the head. This is an excellent contest entry. The picture is a definite plus.
Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks for the great comments and well wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
great Lunatika! and so true...when my husband Larry gets a cold..everyone is miserable! best wishes to you for this contest! blessings today!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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great Lunatika! and so true...when my husband Larry gets a cold..everyone is miserable! best wishes to you for this contest! blessings today!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Did you read my notes, I am not going to let 'my' Larry read this one. LOL Thanks, blessings back to you, Carolyn
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ha ha ...i don't blame you!
Comment from cokecow123
I like the poem. I have seen many women claim to have a little cold but then have the "terminal illness." I would have to say that men get the "terminal illness" to avoid having to work. Yup I am sick, means no work for me today. That may not be the case for everyone but that is how it works
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I like the poem. I have seen many women claim to have a little cold but then have the "terminal illness." I would have to say that men get the "terminal illness" to avoid having to work. Yup I am sick, means no work for me today. That may not be the case for everyone but that is how it works
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks for this great review, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry forces a smile. Many
readers will relate and agree with this message. The
attached photo is the perfect enhancement. Thank You
for your creation.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry forces a smile. Many
readers will relate and agree with this message. The
attached photo is the perfect enhancement. Thank You
for your creation.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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You are welcome and thank you for the fun review. I am glad it made you smile. Carolyn
Comment from Meta4ors
notes and more,
Yes, very true. Personally, I complain all the way through! Totally nailed this within the conformity of assigned poem structure. Great work!
Best,
-Meta
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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notes and more,
Yes, very true. Personally, I complain all the way through! Totally nailed this within the conformity of assigned poem structure. Great work!
Best,
-Meta
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I appreciate your comments and great stars Meta. Thank you, Carolyn