Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi Bill

No doubt, a worthy winner! Hysterical and fabulous image to complement and enhance your poem. As a woman, I can well see where she is coming from. LOL

Yes indeed, lucky not the frypan ... but I wouldn't test your luck much further. Hahahah! It's funny I say almost the same thing - when you've cooked the dinner/done the dishes/make me a cappuccino ... I do say please though. :)))
I guess it can work both ways.

I have enjoyed your poem and your wit. Definitely a good chuckle and taken in the humorous manner it was intended. Great work. Enjoy the spoils. Warm hugs - Lovinia xoxoxo

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you my friend for such a fantastic review, I appreciate your nice comments. I'm also glad that it made you laugh, that makes it all worthwhile. Take care of yourself and have a great day. Bill

reply by Lovinia on 21-Oct-2013

Hi Bill

You have a great sense of humour .... I'm having another chuckle re-reading. Thanks for your sentiments and take care yourself. Have a wonderful day! Hugs - Lovinia xoxoo

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Ha, yes I can see why this won. I can only imagine what my wife would have said and done. If all you got was a finger, you lucked out big time. Great work.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks for your nice comments. Yes, I agree. This type of behavior in today's modern world would probably get a man hurt. 20 or 30 years ago, it was just the normal lifestyle. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from KG Writes

Excellent

Cedar I would say you were lucky it wasn't the frying pan. Congratulations on your win. Anyway, you gave me a chuckle. KG Writes

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Yep KG, I would certainly agree with you. Men can be so insensitive at times, but always remember that we love you ladies and would be lost without you. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

LOL Well done! I can certainly relate as I think many others will as well. The photo and the poem are perfect for each other and the title brings to mind the dumfounded, "Huh, what did I do?" look oh so well.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you for your great review, I appreciate it. Yes, I agree with you. I imagine many women can relate to this little poem from experience. Also, I would like to welcome you to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay. I'm in my fifth year here, so if I can be of any help to you, please let me know. Cedar (Bill).

reply by ragamuffin on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you for the welcome and the offer. I'm glad to see that this is a site on which folks stick around. It's a good sign.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Congratulations, Cedar. Wow! Great little ditty and funny for sure. When people used to flip me off, I'd say "Is that your age, IQ or number of legal parents? LOL..Great job. Bob

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks Bob, I appreciate your nice comments. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend. Bill

reply by Mastery on 17-Oct-2013

You are most welcome, Bill...Bob

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Are you reading those signs....you might have to go back to Fort Knox for some peace Lol.....this is funny. Picture is perfect.......well done as your ribbons prove
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks Jenny for your funny review, I appreciate it. Have a great day and God bless you and yours. Bill

Comment from RPSaxena

Excellent

Hello Cedar,
Nice piece of Humor Poetry/ meets all the desired norms/ Keeping in mind the Author Notes, it can make every reader laugh/smile.
You have rightly achieved what you really deserve. Congratulations!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Congratulations! I'm sure you've read how well chosen your image is here. I just think this is one the best examples of the symbiotic relationship between an image and a great written idea.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you for your comments. Yes, I agree. With these short humorous contests (5-7-5) the trick is to find the most effective picture you can and the words will come automatically. Welcome to this site my friend. Bill

Comment from justatuna

Excellent

Great job with this, and I'm glad you won. Picture matches the words perfectly. I wonder how many women voted for this one? You've said much with little. One of my favorite styles of poetry. Great job and congratulations.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. These short versions of poetry are my favorite too (short and fast). In my opinion (not sure) but the women probably out number the men on this site 5 to 1. I would estimate that several women voted for this piece, simply because the picture shows a woman giving a man the bird. If you enter a lot of contests, the more times you can make a woman the subject of your poem (in a good way)your odds of winning really increases. Take care my friend. Bill

reply by justatuna on 17-Oct-2013

Very smart, my friend. Never thought of that.

Comment from Jade Lawson

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for this contest. You followed well the contest rules and made it fun to read. Congrats for the well deserved winning. The picture complements the poem well. Really fun!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you Angel, I appreciate your nice comments. Have a great day. Bill