Comment from w.j.debi

Exceptional

Who knows what will be found in that place called imagination? The invitation to follow along and find out adds to the intrigue. I did enjoy reading the read and all the possibilities it hints at.

Note: In a couple of places I did have to enlarge the picture to see the words because the white lettering blends into the picture because of the lighter colors in some sections.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks for that constructive feedback, Debi, that's just the sort of thing I was looking for. I apologize for that, I do have a few more bugs to work out. I wanted to try it, see how it went. I am glad that, over all, it has seemed to do fairly well.

Thanks, again!

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Well you Picta good poem......the scale of your imagination is grand and dark slashed through with shimmers....your humor....But Dean I loved your spiritual poem about Jesus on the cross...that was sublime
God bless

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks, kiwijenny. I always appreciate your insights into my work. It's always most helpful.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Dean. As usual, your work is impeccable and interesting. I loved the last two lines of this and the precept before that statement is very well said. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you very much, Bob. I am very happy you feel that away about this new format. Thanks for weighing in on it for me!

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

Very eerie and spine tingling write. I like the format, and the smooth flow of your words. But I think I will have to pass on the invitation to go with you there. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Hah, well Sararb, not all of the places I journey to are musty, corpse-laden tombs nor morgues. Some of them are quite peaceful, serene and beautiful. Perhaps you will allow me to skip the darker regions, and take you to one of the nicer places sometime...

Thanks again!

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

This format worked really well for me, and all I've got to add is this - I'm dreadfully, horribly, shockingly glad you choose to share your monstrous imagination with us all!

PF

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Well than k you very much, pipe, that's a very kind thing to say! I'm dreadfully, horribly, shockingly glad that I have readers such as yourself who appreciate what I try to do!

Thanks again, my friend.

Comment from Gravell

Excellent

Wow what a trip and definitely an eventful one. Wonderful imagination and innovation. Your chosen background is magical. It compliments your poem excellently. The background sound also gives this work a fuller meaning. The rhyming is great, when read aloud it's almost as if singing a song. I can't seem to find any flaw here. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank Gravell, I sure do appreciate that!

Comment from gazzagodbod

Exceptional

loved this my friend absolutely stunning presentation you cant believe the seductive hiss of the vampire superb thank youmy friend six for you gazza

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks very much, gaz! I appreciate that!

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

...and an amazing imagination it is...Wonderful display of characters and settings that you parade by us in this creatively penned piece of work. I loved the feel of the detective's smokey office, the vampire's hiss and the lover's kiss. A beautiful place to visit, (don't know if I would want live there, however. He he). Really enjoyed this piece, my friend, all my best, Bill

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank so much, Bill. I am certainly happy you felt that way!

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

I remember the books you are talking about and this does in a creepy sort of way remind me of them. Well written ... Wanted to mention I pulled my Georgie Porgie poem out of book so chapter 8 is available. Noticed that neither of you gentlemen reviewed the piece so thought it was not up to par with the rest of your book and entries. Thanks for the opportunity anyway. take care. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks, kiwigirl2821. Which poem are you referring to? Send me the link in this reply, and I will be sure to read it, absolutely!

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 23-Aug-2013

awww don't worry dean it's all good. In my portfolio Georgie Porgie. take care. xoxo d

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Well your imagination flows from the portals of your mind like rapids in a stream. Then when the flow is stemmed you reach back into the deep waters of your mind and the flow starts again.. That my friend is compliment to your imagination
tk

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks very much, TK. You've got a pretty vivid imagination yourself, my friend (LOL).

Thanks again!