Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

This seems like a fine tale applicable to many a spoilt young miss.Well done for clearly defining the lengths some will go to supposedly for lovefor,after all, love is blind.
Well written and so true in many cases. A very believable scenario and good picture choice. .

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks, seken58! Your comments warm my heart - thank you so much!

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Lelsie Ann is a very devious young woman. I did get a very clear picture of her scheming ways and felt sorry that she wheedled money from her trusting parents.

Your quatrains moved along nicely and hand good rhyme and near rhyme.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks, barking dog for this encouraging review, I really appreciate it!