Prehistoric Souls
A different Halloween poem44 total reviews
Comment from Keronica
What a roar! I really liked this poem that you wrote on thinking about dinosaur ghosts! I could just see them all above me....it was......crazy....it was...INSANE!!!! It was unbelieveable!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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What a roar! I really liked this poem that you wrote on thinking about dinosaur ghosts! I could just see them all above me....it was......crazy....it was...INSANE!!!! It was unbelieveable!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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I love your enthusiasm! Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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:D
Comment from MAMONIA
You must be a lot of fun on Halloween.
Dinasours?? OMG you really got me going.
Glad they only come out once a year.
Are you going to dress up for halloween
and go trick-or-treating too?
You sound like a kid at heart and I
appreciate what you did here in this
hysterical poem. Good luck always.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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You must be a lot of fun on Halloween.
Dinasours?? OMG you really got me going.
Glad they only come out once a year.
Are you going to dress up for halloween
and go trick-or-treating too?
You sound like a kid at heart and I
appreciate what you did here in this
hysterical poem. Good luck always.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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I usually do not dress up at Halloween but this year my husband and I are dressing up as Space Chimp bounty hunters. It's a long story. I have a wild imagination and once in awhile it goes very wild. THanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
And what fun to read. It was delightful, imaginative, and the differences you showed in the poem show you know something about dinosaurs.
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And what fun to read. It was delightful, imaginative, and the differences you showed in the poem show you know something about dinosaurs.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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I am honored by your generous amount of stars! Thank you for a great review! Elaine
Comment from JJames11
Very imaginative. ife would be so much more exciting for us humans if we still had dinosaurs roaming around; maybe we would all quit fighting with each other if the threat of being eaten by some large creature were imminent. Well anyway, nice poem, definitely a refreshing step outside the ordinary Halloween realm of ghosts and goblins. :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Very imaginative. ife would be so much more exciting for us humans if we still had dinosaurs roaming around; maybe we would all quit fighting with each other if the threat of being eaten by some large creature were imminent. Well anyway, nice poem, definitely a refreshing step outside the ordinary Halloween realm of ghosts and goblins. :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Yes, the dinosaurs would hold our attention. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Blue Diamond
Well now mermaid, a very different Halloween poem.
Charming thought turned into a charming poem.
Really enjoyed it.
Guess if you mix a little counseling and poetry and let it loose in Falmouth, this is what you might expect.
Got the thought that maybe this 'excuse' was thought up for an insurance claim form. I didn't reverse into that telephone pole, it was the ghost brontosaurus!
Lovely. Thank you. With love...H x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Well now mermaid, a very different Halloween poem.
Charming thought turned into a charming poem.
Really enjoyed it.
Guess if you mix a little counseling and poetry and let it loose in Falmouth, this is what you might expect.
Got the thought that maybe this 'excuse' was thought up for an insurance claim form. I didn't reverse into that telephone pole, it was the ghost brontosaurus!
Lovely. Thank you. With love...H x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Haha....I love the idea for an insurance claim! You are giving me ideas. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Elaine
Comment from barkingdog
Have your fun, mermaids, but please don't let them step on MY car. LOL
This is very imaginative and quite a fun read for Halloween. It flows smoothly and is easy to read. You have filled the street, yard and sky with munching, stomping, swooping dinosaurs. They are visible and I'm getting out of their way and taking the mailman with me. LOL
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Have your fun, mermaids, but please don't let them step on MY car. LOL
This is very imaginative and quite a fun read for Halloween. It flows smoothly and is easy to read. You have filled the street, yard and sky with munching, stomping, swooping dinosaurs. They are visible and I'm getting out of their way and taking the mailman with me. LOL
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Haha..Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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LOL You're welcome, Elaine:)BD
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very good and has good strong images of these creatures.It has good smooth line flow and structure.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Your poem is very good and has good strong images of these creatures.It has good smooth line flow and structure.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks. Elaine
Comment from Tonulak
I enjoyed this unique treatment on the ghosts of Halloween. I found a spag "leaving foorprints" should be footprints. The lines that followed about crushing cars mad me laugh, putting me in mind of the Godzilla movies:) VEry unique.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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I enjoyed this unique treatment on the ghosts of Halloween. I found a spag "leaving foorprints" should be footprints. The lines that followed about crushing cars mad me laugh, putting me in mind of the Godzilla movies:) VEry unique.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for finding the spelling error. I appreciate your reading and reviewing this unusual Halloween poem. Elaine
Comment from babylonia
mermaids,
made me smile. made me giggle. one possible spaggie
leaving foorprints(footprints)
damaging vehicles and
telephone poles.
imagery is excellent. what a mess it would be if these dinosaurs showed back up. LOL
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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mermaids,
made me smile. made me giggle. one possible spaggie
leaving foorprints(footprints)
damaging vehicles and
telephone poles.
imagery is excellent. what a mess it would be if these dinosaurs showed back up. LOL
love,
barbara
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for finding the error. I appreciate your reading and revieiwng. Elaine
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elaine,
you are very welcome.
love,
barbara
Comment from Ambition26
that was really good i like it it had it's moments were it was flat lined, but then it pick it great imganation though. you think out side the box. great job!
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that was really good i like it it had it's moments were it was flat lined, but then it pick it great imganation though. you think out side the box. great job!
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine