Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Chapter 6 part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from JSway
I love how you leave us on the edge of our seats. THAT's how you do a cliffhanger! Beautifully rendered, nicely paced, excellent flow. I really liked reading it, it was a pleasure. Just the right amouth of loving touches in the tender scenes.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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I love how you leave us on the edge of our seats. THAT's how you do a cliffhanger! Beautifully rendered, nicely paced, excellent flow. I really liked reading it, it was a pleasure. Just the right amouth of loving touches in the tender scenes.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind reveiew and support.
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You're more than welcome:)
Comment from cooljules
This chapter flowed very well and I liked the cliffhanger at the end. The conversation between the two lovers was funny and realistic. I didn't find any problems.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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This chapter flowed very well and I liked the cliffhanger at the end. The conversation between the two lovers was funny and realistic. I didn't find any problems.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Kelly Shackelford
A sensual blend. The story was great! The characters leaped off the screen I cannot wait to read the next installment. thank you for sharing this with us. :>:>:>
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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A sensual blend. The story was great! The characters leaped off the screen I cannot wait to read the next installment. thank you for sharing this with us. :>:>:>
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mirandawrites
You're one amazing woman, even with all your ordeal you still manage to create such wonderful story. I am drawn deeper and deeper into the story, liking it more and more.
The way you ended the story was so brilliant, very abruptly I must say, but it works in this case. Now I can't wait to find out what happened to Cassie.
Blessings,
Miranda
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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You're one amazing woman, even with all your ordeal you still manage to create such wonderful story. I am drawn deeper and deeper into the story, liking it more and more.
The way you ended the story was so brilliant, very abruptly I must say, but it works in this case. Now I can't wait to find out what happened to Cassie.
Blessings,
Miranda
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Tellis
Way to leave us hanging. You did good because everyone will be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath. LoL Excellent chapter.
Tellis
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Way to leave us hanging. You did good because everyone will be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath. LoL Excellent chapter.
Tellis
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from fictionwriter
Another wonderful chapter in this story. I loved the descriptions of the love making without it being too into the nitty gritty, my kind of story. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Another wonderful chapter in this story. I loved the descriptions of the love making without it being too into the nitty gritty, my kind of story. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from jclark
Barbara - I like this "cliff hanger" and will be happily awaiting your return to finish it. This is a good solid love story and it has been fun following Sara and Joe. Can't wait to see what's next. You take care. Everything is going to be fine and you may even amaze yourself.
Kindly,
Judy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Barbara - I like this "cliff hanger" and will be happily awaiting your return to finish it. This is a good solid love story and it has been fun following Sara and Joe. Can't wait to see what's next. You take care. Everything is going to be fine and you may even amaze yourself.
Kindly,
Judy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thaank you for your kind review. I appreciate you support.
Comment from Readywriter52
"spends a two hours with" should be "spends two hours with"
Sara and Joe have had a great time. They have declared their love. When Cassie doesn't get home on time, they are both worried. A very good afternoon might have turned bad.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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"spends a two hours with" should be "spends two hours with"
Sara and Joe have had a great time. They have declared their love. When Cassie doesn't get home on time, they are both worried. A very good afternoon might have turned bad.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Ted T
Hi Barbara :)
Great work on this chapter. Some really good dialogue and word-pictures.
Now the tension builds and you didn't leave it in a bad place. The last line is perfect.
Ted
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara :)
Great work on this chapter. Some really good dialogue and word-pictures.
Now the tension builds and you didn't leave it in a bad place. The last line is perfect.
Ted
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support. It means a lot of me.
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Hi :)
You're welcome :)
Ted
Comment from Ponder
Hi Barbara,
ANother great chapter, nice descriptions and I thought it was aimed just right. I liked the back and forth dialogue between Joe and Sara. Also the little hook at the end was very well done.
I found one small typo,
Cassie spends a* two hours with friends. Joe and Sara
Good luck with the surgery, you'll be in my thoughts.
Jules
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara,
ANother great chapter, nice descriptions and I thought it was aimed just right. I liked the back and forth dialogue between Joe and Sara. Also the little hook at the end was very well done.
I found one small typo,
Cassie spends a* two hours with friends. Joe and Sara
Good luck with the surgery, you'll be in my thoughts.
Jules
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.