Comment from jshep

Excellent

Great metaphor, Sherry. This is an excellent presentation and poem with a heartbreaking message from the past to the present. The roads are fine, the drivers are killers. See it far too often. Having had two car accidents in the past 2 mos, people ramming into our back in and sandwiching us between cars, I know there are nuts out there. Hope your dream is just that, and all will be well with your wolf-hybrid. Great job. No nits. Joyce

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009

Joyce, thank you for taking the time to read & review my poem. In looking for Kim, we actually did see stretches of road with an abnormally high amount of road-kill and I guess my subconscious was trying to work out the reason behind it.

Thank you for your well wishes for Kimba, but she's been gone since November of 2001. Though I hope that she found a good home somewhere, I will never know for sure.

Again - thanks for reading - sherry

reply by jshep on 14-Jan-2009

How sad, Sherry, but maybe her wolf said called and she has rejoined her natural instincts to be with Mother Nature. Keep that thought. Joyce

Comment from foxtale

Excellent

whoa!
perhaps a Druid thought,
but so often i do see such stretches of road.
I'll steer clear, yet give you a 5 for the hair standing poem.

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009

Thanks for the 5, foxtale. Looking for Kimba, I realized that are stretches of road like this, with dead animals every few miles (or sometimes, every few yards). I guess my sleeping self had to find a reason for it...

sherry