Lingering Twilight
a Lune poetic form23 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I love the thought, but I need to ask where has the twilight been lingering?.. and is it the twilight before the light or the twilight after the light?
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May you and yours have a blessed and merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I love the thought, but I need to ask where has the twilight been lingering?.. and is it the twilight before the light or the twilight after the light?
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May you and yours have a blessed and merry Christmas.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Haha, you nut!! Thank you for a fun review!! I also send you Christmas greetings and wishes for a lovely, blessed day!
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Hi Melissa, this is a wonderful lune poem for the contest. Indeed, lingering twilight waits in the pale shadows of dusk. How beautifully written. All the best of luck.
Also a very Merry Christmas to you and your family. Ulla xxx
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa, this is a wonderful lune poem for the contest. Indeed, lingering twilight waits in the pale shadows of dusk. How beautifully written. All the best of luck.
Also a very Merry Christmas to you and your family. Ulla xxx
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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thank you Ulla!! I also send you heartfelt wishes for a lovely Christmas Day!! Be blessed!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I must admit I thought dusk and twilight were one and the same, but I like the lingering difference in the two, and it throws a different reflection on these things Melissa, well done Beautifully written, good luck blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I must admit I thought dusk and twilight were one and the same, but I like the lingering difference in the two, and it throws a different reflection on these things Melissa, well done Beautifully written, good luck blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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hello Roy. Thanks so much. Dusk and twilight are the same, but I wanted to use both and thought I would string them together. Have a lovely and blessed Christmas!!
Melissa
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Yes, it worked