Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create26 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Beautiful and interesting artwork that you selected for your poem. Also, the writing was well done. The rhyme scheme allowed for a great flow while reading.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Beautiful and interesting artwork that you selected for your poem. Also, the writing was well done. The rhyme scheme allowed for a great flow while reading.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you again Monica! I actually do my own artwork.Really glad you like it! I'm happy you like the poem as well! Your time is busy at this time of year, so I really appreciate you. Stopping in for a read, offering a comments. Let's kind of fine rating too. I hope you have the best holiday ever and you get all you deserve and want!
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Well, we may have to get together for some illustrations on some stories I have been working on, IF you are interested, of course.
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I'm thinking that's a brilliant idea
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Humitree, uses the word 'create' in an imaginative way which brings the procreation thoughts of humankind into the advancement of life in general.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This poem, Humitree, uses the word 'create' in an imaginative way which brings the procreation thoughts of humankind into the advancement of life in general.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Holy smokes Bill! Super glad you like it! And then it comes at such a busy time of year.I doubly appreciate it! Thanks for reading offering you great comment. And you're fine rating. I really hope that you have the best holiday and everything you wish for comes true!
Comment from Avery Daniel
Wow, the rhyme scheme of this poem is... simply breathtaking. Such a beautiful use of words which build upon each other. This poem is an incredible ode to nature-- and even humanity-- that is brilliantly worded and VERY strong.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow, the rhyme scheme of this poem is... simply breathtaking. Such a beautiful use of words which build upon each other. This poem is an incredible ode to nature-- and even humanity-- that is brilliantly worded and VERY strong.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Well, thank you very much Avery. I appreciate your kind words and great insight into this poem. I am pleased that you like it. I make all my own pictures too. I had some fun writing it. Thank you again, and I hope you have the best holiday and santa brings you everything you want and need!
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem is a bold and imaginative poem that explores the themes of creation, evolution, and the potential for a new, hybrid form of life. The poem's use of language is both playful and powerful, with a mix of scientific terms and evocative imagery.
Take care and keep writing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Your poem is a bold and imaginative poem that explores the themes of creation, evolution, and the potential for a new, hybrid form of life. The poem's use of language is both playful and powerful, with a mix of scientific terms and evocative imagery.
Take care and keep writing.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Peter once again, you grace me with your fine words of encouragement, for which i'm always grateful! It was fun to write and to make the pictures too. I wasn't sure at first what the responses wonderful, so if something must have been done. Thank you for your time, your great reading.And you're great insight to have a wonderful holiday when I hope you receive all that you need and wish for!
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm delighted to hear that you enjoyed both writing and creating the pictures. Your creativity and effort truly shine through, and I'm glad to have been able to offer encouragement along the way.
It's always a pleasure to read your work and see the unique perspectives you bring. Wishing you a wonderful holiday season filled with joy, love, and all that you wish for.
Warm regards
Comment from Beejay
Very cleverly crafted.. not an easy thing to do I'm sure, but I like your technique .The imagery paints such a vivid picture, and all the verses are a testament to your craft.
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Very cleverly crafted.. not an easy thing to do I'm sure, but I like your technique .The imagery paints such a vivid picture, and all the verses are a testament to your craft.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow i'm super glad you liked it! I had fun creating the pictures and writing this. Call, they gave me a head scratcher now and again, I switch words around refrased looked at it sideways. Your radio tells me that I'm on the right track. Thank you so much for the fine rating tooth. Your time must have all.I really hope you have an awesome holiday and that everything that you and yours wish for come true!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I'm all for it, even if I don't get it - the one word base poem thing.
I'll be straight up front. I'm in love with your feminine tree. (I'm so transparent!) I like that the artist accents her foliage while depicts him as more trunk and root.
And your poem accentuating procreating only feeds my bent.
Nice work. Keep 'em coming.
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I'm all for it, even if I don't get it - the one word base poem thing.
I'll be straight up front. I'm in love with your feminine tree. (I'm so transparent!) I like that the artist accents her foliage while depicts him as more trunk and root.
And your poem accentuating procreating only feeds my bent.
Nice work. Keep 'em coming.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wayne I think she's single! I'm just kidding. Besides, it might get a little prickly, or perhaps you know some slivers. 🙃🙂😃 i'm glad you like my characters especially the female of the bunch and that you like my artwork too! Always happy to see you here and read your words. But never fail to give me a smile. Thank you so much. If I don't talk to you before the holiday, may the big guy come down your chimney and give you everything you wish for and deserve and your family too.Have a great night!
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Thank you. And all the best to you.