Comment from Beejay

Excellent

I had to read your words a couple of times, each time they became stronger and more thought provoking. A well thought out and crafted piece of work , portraying, mystique and mystery.

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thank you, that's very awesome for you to say! I appreciate your observations.And I have added a few notes at the bottom for those who still find it a bit obscure. Thanks for your great review and writing. Most of all for your time. I hope you have a wonderful holiday at a great day too!

Comment from Peter Jarvis

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 poem intriguingly captures a vivid and otherworldly scene. The imagery of "death cloud mutants weep" and "mastery of the weird meld" creates a powerful sense of mystery and fantasy. The final line, "mesh of manitree," adds a fascinating twist, blending elements of nature and transformation.

Thank you for sharing this creative and thought-provoking piece

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Awesome Peter.I'm really happy you like it! Perfect insight to a poem that is a bit obscure. Definitely.I understand which is very cool! Thank you again, peter.I'm always happy to see you here.Hope to enjoy your day!

reply by Peter Jarvis on 15-Dec-2024

Take care my friend and keep writing.
Stay safe.