Autumn in New England
A Contest Entry24 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Have you set this to music. To me it read like lyrics to a song. I must confess my voice didn't help, but gee it flowed delightfully. The words sit together as comfortably as old friends. A most enjoyable read.
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Have you set this to music. To me it read like lyrics to a song. I must confess my voice didn't help, but gee it flowed delightfully. The words sit together as comfortably as old friends. A most enjoyable read.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jessica,
What a beautiful poem. The picture is perfect for the poem. Yes, New England has the most beautiful fall foliage. I miss it as I live in Texas and we don't see all the fall foliage.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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Jessica,
What a beautiful poem. The picture is perfect for the poem. Yes, New England has the most beautiful fall foliage. I miss it as I live in Texas and we don't see all the fall foliage.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a stunningly celebration of autumn! Your words bring New England's fall to life so clearly. This is well written. What stood out to me was thed etails like "the reds lie blanketed in white" and "staining hillsides, wrapped in red". I could see this in my minds eye. Great job - this was wondefully written.
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What a stunningly celebration of autumn! Your words bring New England's fall to life so clearly. This is well written. What stood out to me was thed etails like "the reds lie blanketed in white" and "staining hillsides, wrapped in red". I could see this in my minds eye. Great job - this was wondefully written.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
Fall is the most amazing season back East. We get nothing like this in Southern California. I enjoyed this line the most.: "The season spills like cabernet across a changing landscape."
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Fall is the most amazing season back East. We get nothing like this in Southern California. I enjoyed this line the most.: "The season spills like cabernet across a changing landscape."
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024