Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Hah!
Rachelle!
What a heartwarming exchange between you and Rebekah, and what a hoot between you and Jane. Poor Jane... not!
I've come close to knowing a few "Jane's" in my life, but nowhere as obnoxious as your Jane.
And I laughed aloud at the reference to your "7 mutes." Sigh... I only am muted by 2 = always have to outdo me! :) :) :)

Much enjoyed!
Lots of emotion = highs and lows in one chapter!
Onward!
diane

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

I think I should teach a master class: How to Be Muted on FS, as I seem to have it down to a science!!

Thank you for your very nice review; you have the nicest way of making me feel like this story is keeping on track. I appreciate that.
xoxoxo

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Will Tova foot the bill for the limo driver, or has Jane been holding out on the girls? This is a very good chapter, and it seems accurate that they finally snap. I would have done it long ago. Thank you for sharing, and Good Riddance, Jane. Happy Travels!
Smiles, Carol


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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

We just couldn't with shy and wonderful-in-all-her-Amishness Rebekah. She really had to be spared the ugliness.

Thanks for the nice review, Carol. Very much appreciated. xoxox