Lamentations
Lamentations of a lost love.23 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your presentation is lovely and I also wish for you a very good week. May God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
This is a well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your presentation is lovely and I also wish for you a very good week. May God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so tender! I love how the weeping willows seeem to share the the emotions of the heart. The idea of salty tears drifting downstream is so sad. II could feel the emotions in your poem. It left me with a sense of longing. Really lovely work!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
Your poem is so tender! I love how the weeping willows seeem to share the the emotions of the heart. The idea of salty tears drifting downstream is so sad. II could feel the emotions in your poem. It left me with a sense of longing. Really lovely work!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for the kind words and review.
Comment from pome lover
well, that's a sad one, all right, "tears drifting down stream."
And a Lovely (perfect) picture to accompany your good 5-7-5 poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
well, that's a sad one, all right, "tears drifting down stream."
And a Lovely (perfect) picture to accompany your good 5-7-5 poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you Katharine, you are very kind. Don
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you are most welcome.