Hotoke
A free verse25 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful presentation and word imagery of nature.
Good alliteration. Good free verse composition.
I believe the soul never dies, we just change form becoming one with nature in connection with the ones we love.
Excellent entry for the Free Verse Poem contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Wonderful presentation and word imagery of nature.
Good alliteration. Good free verse composition.
I believe the soul never dies, we just change form becoming one with nature in connection with the ones we love.
Excellent entry for the Free Verse Poem contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you Gypsy. 8 believe that as well
Thanks so very much for your review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very visual. I loved the dirt white winter sky. It brought the sky into a real picture for me. The whole poem hit my senses. This was an enjoyable poem to read. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This was very visual. I loved the dirt white winter sky. It brought the sky into a real picture for me. The whole poem hit my senses. This was an enjoyable poem to read. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Gretchen!
Katherine
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Your descriptive language paints a complete mental image for the reader. Your descriptors are very graphic and takes the reader's mind to different images. I like this poem and its imagery.
Z
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Your descriptive language paints a complete mental image for the reader. Your descriptors are very graphic and takes the reader's mind to different images. I like this poem and its imagery.
Z
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Robert for your comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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You're welcome!
Comment from royowen
I like to read this sort of poetry Katiemae, writing is simply creating pictures that illustrate what makes us happy, or sad, or creates a world yhat makes us happy, this is beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Suggestion: Blowing breath(s) of wind.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I like to read this sort of poetry Katiemae, writing is simply creating pictures that illustrate what makes us happy, or sad, or creates a world yhat makes us happy, this is beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Suggestion: Blowing breath(s) of wind.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Roy!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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Bless you
Comment from patcelaw
You have introduced me to a very new word in my vocabulary now and I wish you to have a very a wonderful week. I always admire your writing as you do it so well, thank you so much for sharing. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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You have introduced me to a very new word in my vocabulary now and I wish you to have a very a wonderful week. I always admire your writing as you do it so well, thank you so much for sharing. Patricia.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Patricia.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead