Comment from Raul1

Excellent

He sounds like a splendid fellow. I see that he loves baseball and has his family who he cherishes much. Excellent work! I have enjoyed reading it. Interesting. Thank you for sharing!

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hi Raul, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debi,
You seem to have done his life justice in this poem. I don't know if I have read his work. But, I probably have in the time I have been here. You have a lot of apt music at the end. Happy Birthday, Jim. For a birthday present I will review one of your poems.
Keep

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023

Hi Joan, his name is John, and he doesn't write any poetry. He is mostly just good natured stories about baseball, a couple dogs and family. He is very entertaining and I know you will like him. Thanks so much tho for your interest Joan. I know he will appreciate it too.

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Dec-2023

You're welcome, Debi.
I did look him up and he did write some poetry but it was way back in the 2010s.
Joan

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Hats off to you and the magic that you do. I do not know how you have become so adept at putting together rhymes that tell a story so well. You seem to inhabit your subjects life in order to best tell their individual story. Another awesome job.

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023

Thanks so much Nomi. I do have to say, if it was just about rhyming and putting the story together, it would be easier. But to get the meter right while doing it is a lot harder. Having the right amount of syllable just doesn't cut it either if the meter is off. So sometimes the words may have to be mixed up a little in order for it to happen. So it is a give and take situation, but such a rewarding one. Thanks dear brother for the always kind words as you make it happen for me each time with your cheers and encouragement. What more could a sister ask for. Thanks so very much, my dear BBB.

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023

Thanks so much Nomi. I do have to say, if it was just about rhyming and putting the story together, it would be easier. But to get the meter right while doing it is a lot harder. Having the right amount of syllable just doesn't cut it either if the meter is off. So sometimes the words may have to be mixed up a little in order for it to happen. So it is a give and take situation, but such a rewarding one. Thanks dear brother for the always kind words as you make it happen for me each time with your cheers and encouragement. What more could a sister ask for. Thanks so very much, my dear BBB.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Yes John a wonderful and happy birthday to you!
Another great birthday poem and a fine ode to John he deserves it! I like the birthday poems you put out I think its very cool and an awesome thing to do! I also think your poem has a really cute rhyming scheme. And I like the word choices that you have too! Great job! Hope you have a great day!

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hi Lea, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Sorry to be late for this birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Chef John!! I hope you're having a wonderful day. I'm sure good food and good company are a part of it. I learned so much about you in this wonderful poem. Debi really knows how to do this, with all the juicy tidbits about your life, that's permissible on here, anyway.

Debi dear, you rock! You hit this birthday tribute out of the park!

Love and blessings to you both across the miles!
Sal Xos!

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hi Sally, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I don't know how you find the time to write such long, detailed, and beautiful poems.

Excellent birthday poem. I feel I know John better now.

Love
Marival

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hi there Marival, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

I was all excited with your poem, Debi, until I found out that John is a Yankee's fan. Being from New England, I am a die hard Red Sox fan. It sounds like John writes poetry, so maybe I'll give him a pass.

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023

No, Paul, you can't give him a pass. You can however give me one for being a true blue Twins fan. We haven't done much lately, but back in the days of 87-91, we had our Kirby Puckett, Kent Hrbeck and lots of good guys that contributed greatly to a few fun years. I miss that old crew. I guess baseball wouldn't be as much fun if we didn't have some competition. Right?
I also love football and my best friend's first cousin plays for them. His name is TJ Hockenson. So I have gotten to know him quite well and it makes the game more fun. But I am like you and John, I do love sports. My 6'2" 17 year old granddaughter played for her school since second grade, and last yr a dune buggy accident ruined that when she tipped it and broke her arm, hand and three fingers. She is done now forever.

Anyway, I know John will read this and appreciate your kind comments. He may not appreciate me telling you not to give him a pass, but oh well. Haha!
I do agree tho, John is a great guy! And you are too, Paul. Thanks!!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

You hit this birthday story/poem and wish for John right out of the park. You manage to tell us so much about our fellow Fanstorians with these poems, not just a list of their achievements, but who they are and how they work towards their goals. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hey there birthday girl, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my very dear friend. And just so you know, you truly made my day today with your reaction to your poem. That is exactly why these kinds of poems are the most meaningful writing I have ever done, because of people like you. Thank you for that. Love, Debi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Debi, This is a very beautiful and well written birthday poem for our friend, John. We are getting to know our fanstory friends better by your poems. I hope John has a very happy and blessed birthday! love and blessings, Teri

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Teri, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Wow how do you find out all of these amazing facts about the writers on this site!! I know very little about them lol. You have written a lovely birthday tribute to John and I'm sure he will feel honoured!

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Hi Wendyanne, Sorry it took so long for me to respond to this one. I started with the more recent ones because it takes forever to go back pages each time. But I do appreciate the kind comments for John?s poem and we all know John is one of the nicest guys ever, so I just knew he?d understand. So thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi