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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Four kinds of Love in His Life"Spiritual
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Comment from Nina Sexton
This was beautifully presented and I love the concept of the different types of love throughout his life in simple short verses which still captured the essence. Well done...Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
This was beautifully presented and I love the concept of the different types of love throughout his life in simple short verses which still captured the essence. Well done...Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Nina, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Eleri
This is a very beautiful poem with the same end rhyming sound throughout. The rhythm is good too and it really sums up what love is all about. I am sure that you will do well in the contest with this one.
Eleri
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
This is a very beautiful poem with the same end rhyming sound throughout. The rhythm is good too and it really sums up what love is all about. I am sure that you will do well in the contest with this one.
Eleri
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Eleri, I am so touched by your review and kind words. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am honored by your six stars as well. You have put a smile on my face that is sure to last for a while.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is brilliant!
His life's four kinds of love were excellently written and held a special place in this reader's heart.
There is no better love than the ones you've touched on here. I loved reading this, and It gave me a great feeling inside. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
This is brilliant!
His life's four kinds of love were excellently written and held a special place in this reader's heart.
There is no better love than the ones you've touched on here. I loved reading this, and It gave me a great feeling inside. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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John,, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Sally Law
May I say I love this? I've experienced them directly or indirectly, number 4 through my husband's love for our children since I never knew the love of a father. I take that back. I have received it in abundance from the Heavenly Father.
A beautiful poem, mystery poetess.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) XOs
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
May I say I love this? I've experienced them directly or indirectly, number 4 through my husband's love for our children since I never knew the love of a father. I take that back. I have received it in abundance from the Heavenly Father.
A beautiful poem, mystery poetess.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) XOs
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Sally, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments, as well as the gracious six stars for this poem. It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Lisasview
Sweet young loving poem about love... As the years pass you can add to it... that is for sure.
Being in love and staying true is so very important.
Being the best Daddy ever...
I wish you the very best in the contest,
Lisa
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
Sweet young loving poem about love... As the years pass you can add to it... that is for sure.
Being in love and staying true is so very important.
Being the best Daddy ever...
I wish you the very best in the contest,
Lisa
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Oh Lisa, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Boogienights
Beautifully written about all the love you have in your life. How lucky they are to have you and you them. I too, am blessed with a loving spouse and children, and a mom who is now gone. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
Beautifully written about all the love you have in your life. How lucky they are to have you and you them. I too, am blessed with a loving spouse and children, and a mom who is now gone. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Oh Sharon, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good mono-rhyme poem about four different types of love. There are a few more.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have an enjoyable day
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
Hi
This is a good mono-rhyme poem about four different types of love. There are a few more.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have an enjoyable day
Joan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Joan, I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the four types of love.
-Effective imagery and rhyme describe each stage in his life.
He shows appreciation and love for his mother, and
makes sure he does right by his girlfriend.
-He loves and respects his wife, and he
will always love the child that has come into their lives.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the four types of love.
-Effective imagery and rhyme describe each stage in his life.
He shows appreciation and love for his mother, and
makes sure he does right by his girlfriend.
-He loves and respects his wife, and he
will always love the child that has come into their lives.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Pam, I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!
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You are very welcome. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is an excellent verse! Your sentiments are beautifully expressed in this flowing and very pleasing verse. And your monorhymes, unforced as they are, are imaginative and a delight to read. A definite 'feel good' poem! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
This is an excellent verse! Your sentiments are beautifully expressed in this flowing and very pleasing verse. And your monorhymes, unforced as they are, are imaginative and a delight to read. A definite 'feel good' poem! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Debbie, I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!
Comment from Barry Penfold
Lovely poem and fits the bill as a love poem. Rhyming good and like the format of the wording. All the best with the contest. Have a great day and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
Lovely poem and fits the bill as a love poem. Rhyming good and like the format of the wording. All the best with the contest. Have a great day and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I thank you so very much for such kind comments. I appreciate it so very much!