Comment from Sanku

Excellent

such a cute picture ! Teri has more than one cat?
lovely lyric for a birthday song .You are such a kind soul to remember the birthdays of your fanstory friends...

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Hi Santha, Now I do know that she has a lot more than one cat, but I do not know how many. Lol. I thank you for the very kind comments for my poem and the sweet wishes for Teri. I know she will appreciate it as much as I do.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this birthday with for Teri with us. I am a fan of hers and enjoy her writing and her friendship. Thank you for letting us know. I will surely send her a message.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Hey there Barb, as I am still waiting for my new eyes to start working right, I am waiting to review so many more than I do now, so I will then see both of yours. I am excited. I hear some good stuff about you both. I thank you for the very kind comments for my poem and the sweet wishes for Teri. I know she will appreciate it as much as I do.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Happy birthday Terri, indeed an amazing life with new chapters waiting to unfold. Happy and amzing years are laid i front of you. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Iza, I thank you for the very kind comments for my poem and the sweet wishes for Teri. I know she will appreciate it as much as I do.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Debi.
Once again you've shown your true colors, your love a devotion to do many on this site. Your birthday wish poems are something magical and I'm sure most of us look forward to finding and opening up to read.

Enjoy the weekend...
John

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Hi John, l thank you for your always kind words for my work. I do appreciate it so very much!
I know Teri will too as she reads all of the birthday wishes,
Thanks again my dear friend.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Thank you so much Debbie for this great and very well crafted birthday poem for me. I love all the different birthday songs from the cats too. I appreciate you and thank you. May God bless you today! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Hey Sweetie and Happy Birthday. There's something I forgot to tell you that I am not done after I post. It isn't until then that I can see where it needs the improvements. I hope you will read it again and see that I added more of a personal touch. I just love you so much, but when I wrote it was trying to get the facts in and had to take some unimportant stuff out to get the love and your sweetness in there more. I hope it will look better to you now.
And thank you for your kind words.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

You should start a birthday poem business. Get people to send info about the birthday guy or gal and work your magic. (For a small fee). Lol. I know, I know, when ever you turn a passion into a business it becomes work. This was great. Happy birthday to Teri. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Hi Gretchen, you are so darn sweet. l thank you for your always kind words for my work. I do appreciate it so very much!
I know Teri will too as she reads all of the birthday wishes,
Thanks again my dear friend.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Happy Birthday, Teri dear! Teri, you were one of my first friends of FanStory. I'm so glad to have met you, my sister in Christ. You're walk with the Lord and poem/prayers uplift me every day! I love you, Teri!

Debi dear, I love you too, and thank you for sharing this super sweet poem for our Teri. I'm sure it blessed her to no end!

Sending you both love and blessings acroos the miles,
Sal XOs

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Hi Sweet Sally, l thank you for your always kind words for my work. I do appreciate it so very much!
I know Teri will too as she reads all of the birthday wishes,
Thanks again my dear friend.

reply by Sally Law on 07-Jul-2023

Most welcome, my friend. I'm delighted to stop in for Teri's birthday party! XOs

Comment from Paul Manton

Excellent

Really a six for your hysterical find on YouTube - and of course, I could not resist it - especially 'Orson Wells' at the end demanding his cake!
Quick whizz through the tech: iambic heptameter in verse one, followed by tetrameter throughout, in quatrains of rhyming couplets with only one tiny tweak to recommend - verse three needs one extra syllable - I strongly recommend you add 'the' before 'two of them' - and voila! it is perfect.
Another great tribute poem, Debi - and I shall be laughing at those cats for many days to come.
Paul

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Hi Paul, l thank you for your always kind words for my work. I do appreciate it so very much!
I know Teri will too as she reads all of the birthday wishes,
Thanks again my dear friend.

reply by Paul Manton on 07-Jul-2023

God bless you Debi, and all the kind work you do for your friends
Paul

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Aww. A sweet poem full of love and fellow feeling. Easy unforced rhyme and rhythm. Well done and thank you for sharing this.

John

"Seeing through a glass darkly."

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Thanks John, l thank you for your always kind words for my work. I do appreciate it so very much!
I know Teri will too as she reads all of the birthday wishes,
Thanks again my dear friend.


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Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

Poem for a birthday occasion as we celebrate with Teri at Fanstory. Author is pretty obvious. rhyme and metre are both pretty forced. Well illustrated and designed. Congratulations go out to Teri

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Thanks so much Faith and I thank you for the great feedback. My meter is usually right on, but missed a syllable in a line and so was able to go in and correct it. I really appreciate your kind comments for Teri and the helpful hint. Thank you again!

reply by Carlos' girl on 07-Jul-2023

My name is judith. Not Faith

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Oops, I had faith on my mind and it was a slip. Sorry about that Judith.