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Comment from w.j.debi
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What a wonderful tribute to a life-long friend. You've shared many things and supported each other through the years. I love the ending stating that you have to keep her near because she knows too much about you.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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Debi this was so sweet and such a joy to read. You have an endless supply of love in your heart for those you care about. I hope you always feel how much love is returned! Your friend will no doubt, love this. Happy birthday to your bestie! Another wonderful poem!
<3
Jess
BTW I'm sure I don't have to tell you, the last line is my favorite lol <3

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Paul McFarland
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This is a really good birthday poem, Debi. It's great to have friendships that span many years. That usually comes from not moving around too much. Is that you in the cow suit?

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from shelley kaye
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aww it's cool to hear of people staying friends for most of their lives...

wonderful birthday message with sweet hope for more years

thank you for sharing with us
shelley :)


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from lyenochka
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What a beautiful thing to have nurtured a close friend for over forty years! Thank you for sharing about your lovely friend, Patty! It's wonderful that the Lord brought you two together at the right time! Happy Birthday to her!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from jessizero
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Your poem was well-written and flowed well. It was also very sweet. It reminded me of my sister. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to both you and your friend.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a charming and heartwarming poetic tribute to a lifelong friend. God sent you to one another. Such a friendship should be cherished, and it sounds like you both appreciate each other. You did a fantastic job celebrating your friend in rhyme. The last line added a nice touch of humor.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from nomi338
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They say, keep your friends close, and your enemies even closer. I say the ones you lock onto, are the ones who know where the bodies are burried, the dates and times they were killed, and the poison you used to kill them. These ones you keep under lock and key.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I've just lost my life-long friend. We were friends for 47 years, we met when both our eldest son's started school. I'll miss her.

This is a lovely poem that I'm sure she will love. It's so nice keeping a friendship where not only the two of you get on so well, but your husbands do too. Well done, Debs, I enjoyed reading your poem. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful tribute to Patty, this was great, Debi. It was truly fantastic that you took the time to wish Patty a Happy Birthday. I loved the picture, the way you each looked, you were meant for each other. I especially loved your words, that's what true friendship really is. Blessings n Hugs!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023