Tributes
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Happy Birthday Joan ~ dragonpoet"Any occasion
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a lovely call to Joan and I'm sure this is also AA tribute of great loveliness and I thank you. I'm sure Joan us too this is a wonderful and sweet ode.
I finally wish you could put this submission at all no governmental or spelling issues. No problems with word choices or subject matter. I think it's all really awesome and what a kind thing to do. Thank you so much I look forward to Your next submission have a great day!
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This is a lovely call to Joan and I'm sure this is also AA tribute of great loveliness and I thank you. I'm sure Joan us too this is a wonderful and sweet ode.
I finally wish you could put this submission at all no governmental or spelling issues. No problems with word choices or subject matter. I think it's all really awesome and what a kind thing to do. Thank you so much I look forward to Your next submission have a great day!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lol, this is such a lovely Birthday poem to our dear Joan. I love the fun parts where you ask for a loan. The whole poem is lovely, Debs, the serious, the fun, the whole. Very well done, my kind and generous friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Lol, this is such a lovely Birthday poem to our dear Joan. I love the fun parts where you ask for a loan. The whole poem is lovely, Debs, the serious, the fun, the whole. Very well done, my kind and generous friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Debi, SOTU, you have penned a wonderful birthday poem for Joan. I am sure that she will love it. I like your Merry-go-Rhyme poem. If a person can't be silly on a birthday, then when? As for serious, life takes care of that.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within. Of special note:
You actually are just close enough
For me to throw a stone
(How lovely is that! In this big-wide global community, you've found a neighbor. How lovely. Just don't hit her up for a loan. Com'on Sis,
Lol.)
I love the artwork choice, so whimsical--the way a birthday should be.
So let me join FanStory and say, "Happy Birthday, Joan. She doesn't seem like a dragon to me. Well done. You made me smile. Xo. M
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Hello Debi, SOTU, you have penned a wonderful birthday poem for Joan. I am sure that she will love it. I like your Merry-go-Rhyme poem. If a person can't be silly on a birthday, then when? As for serious, life takes care of that.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within. Of special note:
You actually are just close enough
For me to throw a stone
(How lovely is that! In this big-wide global community, you've found a neighbor. How lovely. Just don't hit her up for a loan. Com'on Sis,
Lol.)
I love the artwork choice, so whimsical--the way a birthday should be.
So let me join FanStory and say, "Happy Birthday, Joan. She doesn't seem like a dragon to me. Well done. You made me smile. Xo. M
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I love your witty, fun, fast moving birthday poem. Totally creative and a very fun read. You are so good with words. It even made me laugh. Great job!
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I love your witty, fun, fast moving birthday poem. Totally creative and a very fun read. You are so good with words. It even made me laugh. Great job!
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2023